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Im TirEd of yAll NeGatIve NIggAz
I spit with risk of leavin a Mc DeaD/
Dont fuk wit this unLess u resist a shot thru ur head/ press ChEst depress ya niggaz leaVE on Bed/ lets get the best,fuck ya rest,yall havent make tha street Test/ bullshit niggaz talk while a dog walk/ u should run nigga run when u see the dog bark/ u should run for ur gun when u see murda on the park/ yall be like ur shit is iight u should elevate/ but the truth im doin betta ya niggaz hate/ take ur space to replace the base u takin for waste at this time late/ u gettin rip,im up like a dick,neva fuck wit ya niggaz cuz yall fake/ yall niggaz own MICGOSOFT thats why yall BE GAY/ thats why im like a and1 tape/ u wanna watch my moves let it loose so juss push re-play/ ima "wild on nigga" i do it the E! way/ im tired of this nigga,everyday u make some1 take anotha way/ give it up niggaz,let me live,so i can REALLy ELEVATE............. its juss somethin i did on like 5 minutes, DONT HATe |
GOOD WORDPLAY...multies where there...vocab..could be up'd
stay'd wit ur topic..and stay'd wit the hate... so nothin rly was wrong wit this piece.. good shit man... keep it good peace |
Hey, can you post up who you replied to?
Rules Thread Link - More Information On It Can Be Found Here Thanks Man. |
It was pretty cool. Nice elevation. I think that you need to think up like some new topics though. A lot of Emcees rap about how they are the best at rapping. Overall good drop.
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shit was aiight can do betta for a newbie i give u a 7 kid keep flowin cuz u got potential
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Thanx dog,thats what im talkin bout Positive niggaz, That Really Helps Thanks ppl
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Yeah this was pretty good....Try to keep the lines around the same length though helps with the structure but it was still good....Your flow was alright i thought, could be a bit better...Wordplay was alright...vocab could be up'd though....overall this was alright...keep at it and keep dropping.
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Thanks, thats how u should talk to some Newbie u know Help'em dont be hatin, thanx Masta C
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Damn i ForGot tHe lInks here is Ithttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=924443#post924443
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93286 |
Uppin THis SHiAT
Up ppl i need ur reply
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ay no hate here .. but i wasn't really feelin this peice .. but since you say it's a keystyle .. i'll give you some props comin straight outtuh ya head .. but just a suggestion .. try writing your shit out .. it'll make it better because you can actually edit out what needs to be fix .. in my opinion that gangsta shit is wack over the net .. try gettin deeper .. na'sayin? no hate .. keep droppin .. get at me!
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no hate but it wasnt the best u can do
u got potential pretty straight nice |
no hate but i wasn't really feelin' this one. you got skill. keep it up.
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that was dope holla back
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I think it was a straight rap, I just didnt like the subject. I think you could do alot better with diffrent subjects. Ayo, go peep my flow for me right quike. Tell me what you think bout it. It is here in the Open Mic, so it aint hard to find.
OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
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