Amend v/s phiXion
 

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Like Fake Orgasms..This Kids' Never Goin' Off..He Only Pretends..
I Owe His Mom N Apology..So I'll Fuck Her & Then Make Amends!!
Fuck This Gay Repents..Leave You Extinct G..Simply I Rip Thee..
Half Tha Real MF'N G..He Just Borin..Like His Avy..Ren & No Stimpy!!
You Just A Simp See..Stonin' Ya Throne & Leavin' You Bleedin' Friend..
Like Reading 'Waiting To Exhale'..Rb Is Screamin'..Who Needs A Men!?!
Gun Or The Source..? Either Way The Kid Knows My Mag Slaughters..
Like Diving Tandum With Shemy..I'm Ashamed To Be His Tag Partner!!..
Like Michael J. Fox Holdin' Alphabet Blocks..I Leave You Shook G!.
Props To Amend..He Aint Embarrassed About His Record..I Would Be!!

Meh...Decided To Key This Up Now...Goodluck..

Oh & Beat Me ;)...You Promised..

Needless Drop, Your Weak & Soft - & Is Ya Favorite Color Purple.?
Fuckin Square, Imma Beat Ya Block - Until Ya Av Is Runnin' Circles//
phiX's A Fake, Like A Titless Date - & I Didnt Mean To Tell Ya Past
But Since U Have No Future, Pick A Place - ...Between Hell & Back//
I Put Failure's Last, So Dont Front - Amend Keeps His Promise Slim
Nice Verse, I Like That 1 Punch, But I Fell Asleep Threw 9 Of Them//
Despite Amend, & This Prideless Win - Im Just In My Practice Mood
But Believe Imma Beat This Kid - Like It's A Micheal Jacksons Move//

. . .in 8.!

Quotes:

phiXion:
Like Fake Orgasms..This Kids' Never Goin' Off..He Only Pretends..
I Owe His Mom N Apology..So I'll Fuck Her & Then Make Amends!!

Amend:
phiX's A Fake, Like A Titless Date - & I Didnt Mean To Tell Ya Past
But Since U Have No Future, Pick A Place - ...Between Hell & Back//

I liked this battle kinda... Good Job Both Of Yas

phiXion started off hard but after the first punch i was kinda feelin sleepy lol
nice wordplay... u got potential bro...

Amend started soft and ended hard... after the first to lines i knew amend had this battle around his penis.

Vote: Amend

Amend took this battle i felt, just more original concepts .. avatar line was decent, the 'fell aslepp' one made me chickle .. micheal jackson one was ehhhhhh, buy yeah, he had the better verse, more originality, thats what got him this ..

Vote: amend

Yep..Thanks For Votes...Uppin..

Was My Verse Really That Bad^^^^^^............
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Hmmm not a bad battle but heres the breakdown...

Punches=Amend..nice but phix was soft
Metas=Amend
flow=both
structure=both
Creativity=Phix but no effect
Sustainment=Amend
Enjoyment=Amend
Vote=Amend

Amend came good Phixion dint surprisingly pz

amend took this better punches flow wordplay and all that just stood out that line bout beatin his block till his avy runs circles was nasty that won this battle

vote=amend

vote - amend. mostly because it interested me more.
phixions was less original and longer (making it more boring in this case since this battle wasnt too interesting).
a few funny lines from amend.

Vote-Amend

Amends verse was more entertaining and more original concepts, he also had some humour in his lines.

Amend got this....sorry phiX....you gotta come harder......amend can come dope when he trys and it showed....altho i kno amend didnt really come that hard

Amend had good punches and jus took phiX period

Vote Mend