Paradøx Vs. 1liner
 

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u spit first
no dick crew ect votes....
no bullshit........

get ready mayne.

u forgot to make a poll/battle man.................and u can join Lyrikal Murder..... drop 5 links and a 10 line spit at Lyrikal Intenions Thread... Lyrikal Intentions a.k.a Lyrikal Murder

i'll tear-ya-tops-----makeN you wish the Terror-stopped
cuz i'll hang Par-a-dox with his very own pair-of-sox
I'll scare-tha-cops with a flare-of-shots-
- cared-to-stop but this par-a-dox fuckin dared-ta-knock/
when he nows Murber is somethin i can't bare-to-watch
so i let my words do it wile I swear-ta-stop
cuz my words will leave this bitch burryed under my Very owm
lair-of-rocks

sorry but i'm workin on vocab and multis sorry it aint a hard verse but complicated

^ain't bad............................................... .................................................. .......

you spit weak shit and very proud of it, you must be a vegan...
your progression is pointless, knowing as you reading, your bars were never compete-ing...
make like c-section and just kill yourself because its hopeless...
my name is too hard for you to pronounce, --- voters need to note this...
you've been played out, like 50 being repetitive about 9 times...
you could pronounce you a badboy, but you still wouldn't shyne...


keystyle....

VOTES!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93331

^ thats were C-section says he's killing himself...lol
a vegan is a strick vegetarian
9 times = shots
Badboy artist Shyne

up i need tghis wack ass battle closed>>>>>>>>>.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............................

^ no doubt.....

this was weak battle......... but oh well uppin for votes....
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Open- para
Metas - liner
Creavitity - tie
Personals - tie
Flow - tie
Finish - para
Abuse - para

vote = paradox, sorry 1liner, nice work with the words but they lacked heat.

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lmao GREAT VERSE.. i like the way you used his name and mixed t in every line..

i'll hang Par-a-dox with his very own pair-of-sox
^^Funny^^

waiting till Paradox post a verse.. but i cant vote on this battle cause we in the same crew...

^then why post...... .................
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move on ........................ uppin for votes.....................

tru uppin fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...... .................................................. .................................................. ............

How the fuck can u say we tied in personals he said nothin personal bout me
G?D why -God Why............................................... .....................................

punches: 1liner
flow: 1liner
structure: par
creativity: par
enjoyment: 1liner

vote: 1liner

nice battle by both1

peace

poll plz ..Jesus>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.................................................. .................................................. .................