Frightful Love
 

Why am i afraid to hold your hand?
I can't help but think something is wrong...like something bad is about to happen.
i know it's coming but i keep going and stumble right into it.
I can't use the word LOVE as easily as you.
It's not just a word that you can say to any random person.
It's a feeling that comes deep within the chambers of your heart.
I used to say i love you, but now I honestly can't.
For you are my greatest joy, my deepest sorrow, and my greatest fear.
This is my Frightful Love.


Aight tell me what ya think bout this one.

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I wrote it pretty quickly but put alot of my emotion into it so tell me waht ya think and holla back at me.

Uppin

Don't sleep peepz uppin on this

DAAMN. This was a KICK ASS DROP. Lots of emotion. Not too many guys can write stuff like this. And you certainly put ur heart into this one. Something that I can relate to. I cant say those words unless I mean em, and for most ppl its hard for me to actually mean it. Seems like you would go through anything for this person and like i said, u put madd emotion into it. Great job! Most respect. Keep em comin.

this was good. kinda short but it was sweet and to the point. Had a meaning and thats what counts. Keep elevating and dropping. Spect JT

Thx both yall if ya can peep my other stuff imma go peeps everyone elses appreciate the feedback...


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UPPIN on this right here i might be gone for a lil but ill check back lata

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it was short but it packed alot of emotion. you talked about a word alot of people take advantage of. iam feeling it......

Thx i appreciate the feedback. Uppin on this pome right here dont sleep people.

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this is a pretty good drop man, but i had to tell you u broke the forum rules, your only allowed one poem a day, 1luv.

O my bad i'll stop then. Thx fortellin me. Uppin