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_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ vs. Metaphorm
Rules:
o 10 bars/lines o First to 5 votes o Check Ins Mon. 22nd o Due Date Tues. 23rd |
go look at what i said in bitchslapped. answer that back i aint checking in yet,______________________
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okay, i'm checking in now. cuz i'm going to sleep you check in too.
oneeeeeeeeee __________________ |
I haven't read what you said yet, but I'm checking in.
I'll prolly post up my verse tomorrow night if I get a chance. The deadline is just there so I make sure I get around to posting. |
Child Abuse:
you haven't even won a battle, you don't wanna go with me, son, all you do is lose battles, see your record sits at 0 and 3.. you spit elementary style rhymes, I'm 'bout to put 2 in ya wig, and leave your ass flat on your back just like the dude in ya sig.. I don't even try and I got you shook, you're feeling all scary to rap, I see it humorous you from the same place that I burried your dad.. people say that you're the wackest here, it's kinda true in my eyes, this match's tribute to M. Jackson, saying there's no abuse is a lie.. my disses clot ya throat, I seen that bullshit you thought you wrote, it's funny, only link in your sig is the only battle you ever got a vote.. |
Let the voting commence.
------------------------------------------- All haul me. La la la, 100 characters is too much, bla bla bla. |
Lmao. Excuse that last post, I'm baked as fuck, and it won't let me delete it.
Holy shit, marijuana is very, very good. |
uhhhhhhhh
believe it's my turn.....
yo yo i don't give a fuck bout your antics, just rememba you been struck by the outlandish meta? i seen better metaphores in stores in greek language* come to this i'm murderous, your all slow like the words from kiss* thinking you the flyest, kno your the highest...i just turned a bird to a bitch where the fuck my hoes at, nigga wuldn't be ill if you sniffed my bozack i got the joke raps fold and snap like your group and you can quote that* you can't even show for, being a 14 year old whore* actually that's untrue, my grandma saw you...grabbed your dick and it tore and on all fours, you a sick bastard but not in words this battle's like, how i eat my pizza...can't stop dropping herbs* *understand meta4's in greek(i don't think so) *jada=kiss rhymes slow *quote that(his crew) *(he's 14 year's old that's his age) *his occuption is your(my) grandma(lol) *like my pizza with herbs and spices(he's getting eaten as a herb) peace;) |
Nice job Abuse. Seems like everybody loves their pillow now adays.
Vote, vote, vote, vote, vote, vote, vote, vote... |
ok heres the breakdown...
vocab=meta structure=tie flow=tie punches=meta opener=meta closer=tie multis=noabuse (just) creativity=tie personnals=meta overall=meta quite a close battle but you seen where my votes at.....Pz |
Thanks for the honest voting.
This 100 character bullshit is getting annoying. Blaaaaaaa Blaaaaa!!!!!!!!!! |
vocab=meta
structure=tie flow=Meta punches=meta opener=tie closer=tie multis=noabuse (just) creativity=tie personnals=meta overall=meta only catergorei no had was multis jus coz he had em nice battle overall..jus looked like meta knew wot he was doin pz |
OPener: Abuse
Closer: Meta Flow: Meta Personals: Meta Punches: Meta Win: Meta Make your fuckin words biger Meta. Hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93775 |
Thanks for the votes and critique.
I'd stop upping this battle, but it gets about one vote then gets sent to the third page, so don't mind me. |
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