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Token 11-22-03 12:00 PM

Tökën Vs. Chrit
 
Rules:
No d/r Votes
No hate Votes
No crew Votes
No Feeding

Non Voters:
Axe E. Um
Aisle 5
Walter Wall
Origin ILL (no offense)
Lethargic

^ Means no feedback as well.

No Vote Swaying

8 Line Max

Chrit 11-22-03 12:03 PM

Blah...

In....

You're still fucked


Token 11-22-03 12:04 PM

^ Rules Said No Vote Swaying :o

Oh And 7 aka Yung Swoop and Taktik cant vote... no beef with him though

Token 11-22-03 12:21 PM

Blah, 8 Lines Match Me.

You actually dope? Whats all this talk of hoax and hexes
Quote:
Originally Posted By The End
(And Chrit would murder you.. He has a voting ring the size of Texas.)

^ There's proof he's all hype.. Your talent has always been lost
You accelerating in this battle is like street racers without nos
You're like the home shopping network.. Never get what you order
Lines so far from hot, it's like you ski'd Thru Alaska to cross the border
You think you're hard for being in jail for beating up two men
That's only half of the beats you had while you were there, chritenen

Chrit 11-22-03 12:28 PM

LMAO...
So no-one can vote...
Fair enough...
Still destroy you kiddo



Man fucka Token... Polar opposite of Superman...
Since when he goes in the booth,,,
....He comes out LESS of a man
Kid'll come with old personal and no matter what he thinks...
We're all tired of em...
...I mean even Zelda hates his links
Kid got his record for given it... While I constantly crush domes...
And I'd call this a barn-burner but that'd put you out of a home...
Attend a Token party whenever I wanna see bashin of gays...
And I was done last night but...
Quote:
ThaRemix23: yeah i gotta pre write so it'll take me till tommorow anyways.

Token 11-22-03 12:30 PM

Attempt at swaying deleted...
And I'll post the entire AIM convo if you really want me to
-Chrit

Dominator 11-22-03 01:00 PM

[font size=4]Tokens Verse[/font]

You actually dope? Whats all this talk of hoax and hexes

quote:
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Originally Posted By The End
(And Chrit would murder you.. He has a voting ring the size of Texas.)
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This was okay...... you could have came stronger with the first line but nonetheless, ive never seen a pm quoted in content in a verse before, it it was creative..... 7.5/10


^ There's proof he's all hype.. Your talent has always been lost
You accelerating in this battle is like street racers without nos

I like this punch.... the 2nd line is great..... street racing is the shit lol.. except i went to court for it...... 9/10

You're like the home shopping network.. Never get what you order
Lines so far from hot, it's like you ski'd Thru Alaska to cross the border

The home shopping network line is good, you dont watch that shit do you? lol.... 2nd like was aight, coulda been a 9 but im taking off a 1/2 point for wording.... 8.5/10

You think you're hard for being in jail for beating up two men
That's only half of the beats you had while you were there, chritenen

This is okay.... it talks about masturbation tho and I think sex punches are stupid..... but ill add a .5 onto this for the fact that he actually came up with a sex line thats not played 7.5/10

[font size=4]Chrits Verse[/font]

Man fucka Token... Polar opposite of Superman...
Since when he goes in the booth,,,
....He comes out LESS of a man

Hmmm..... this was kinda a WaCk punch.... the rhyme scheme is weak, Superman/Man.... comon Chrit your better than that... 6/10

Kid'll come with old personal and no matter what he thinks...
We're all tired of em...
...I mean even Zelda hates his links

Good punch..... The Chrit picture has been used by Brixton and the Zelda/Link play is good..... 9/10

Kid got his record for given it... While I constantly crush domes...
And I'd call this a barn-burner but that'd put you out of a home...

This punch was aight.... 8.5

Attend a Token party whenever I wanna see bashin of gays...
And I was done last night but...

quote:
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ThaRemix23: yeah i gotta pre write so it'll take me till tommorow anyways.
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This is really fed.... you just stole Tokens thing of quoting in the SAME battle.... w/e tho I wont count against that.... 7.5/10

TOKENS SCORES- 7.5 , 9 , 8.5 , 7.5 - 32.5

CHRITS SCORES- 6 , 9 , 8.5 , 8.5 - 32

Opener- Token
Closer- Chrit
Flow- Token
Punches- Token [By .5]
Creativity- Tie

Overall- Token

Chrit 11-22-03 01:02 PM

^^^

I wrote this last night kiddo...

Its impossible when you feed before the kid even posts

Just For your info.........

Dominator 11-22-03 01:07 PM

Oh okay well as I said I didnt count it.... your closer still killed his by a point..... your 2nd 3rd and 4th were better than his combined but your opener was weak.... and can you hit up my battle -vs- EnVy SkiLLs in Elevated Front Lines? Youll see it its up top....

.... Polled

MeNTiLL 11-22-03 01:29 PM

Damn ... Is it juss me ? ... But Token came weak as fucc ... Come on ... "Street Racers witout Nos" ? ... LoL it's only called Nos on Fast & Furious ... If U knew nething about street racin ... And besides that ... It was wack anyway ... The opener was aight ... But besides that the rest of Token's verse was very very weak ... Chrit took this battle easily wit harder hittin' punches ... and wit ... He had a nice finisher to kill the opposition ... So he gets my vote easily ... And one more thing ... LoL at this kid sayin' all them people can't vote ...

Vote : Chrit

Chrit 11-22-03 04:02 PM

1-1.

Not even gonna go there


Dominator 11-22-03 04:12 PM

I didnt leave my link b4 so I am now

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93079

Mystery~murdera 11-22-03 04:17 PM

edited out by End.. not registered voter.
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13th Disciple 11-22-03 04:18 PM

Edited out by Chit....


Token 11-22-03 05:47 PM

2-1

And FYI... people like reading my battles...
Hence actual decent heads peeping them....

So quit trying to sway kiddo

-Chrit


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