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eMiNeM MiNis vs eviltwinz
aight checkin in.........................u spit first............................................. .........1
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the onlyt thing you and eminem got in commopn is skin tone / mutherfucker ill slice ya kneck till your bones are shown / mini must stand for ya lil ass dick /put that shit away / no girl wants to suck on a stick / ill give ya girl mine she already had before/ but it aint my fault she keep comi back for more
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well yo rhymes are aight but need sum werk/ take notes from yo gurl watch the way she twerk/ if u could be even half as good as her ur straight/ but ull neva have time to see her or even go out on a date/ but its ok ur used to that/thats why ur always sittin at home ur comp gettin fat
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both were extremely whack. u 2 need a lot of work1 keep battlin and ur get there! my vote goes to evil twinz. u both need to structure ur wrk other wise its shit to read take a look at sum other experienced battlers and copy how they do!
vote= evil twins better punches but not really if u no wat i mean |
what the fuck was that? botha you need MAD elevation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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yo hti up the newer one..........................this one was wack.............................................. .................................................. .......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=94260
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yo both wack, evil twins got it, but both wack, work on structure, make bars and dont stretch your lines then work on punches, .
my vote evil twins,,,,,,,, yo can y'all vote on this? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7815#post937815 |
aight my win can we close this battle .................................................. ..............
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