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Brixton -v/s- Amend
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check in...good luck bra..
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aight bra am gonna have to drop tomoz coz i gotta go ........i'll def drop 2moz pz_______________________________________________
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Yo B, Its A, And I See How - You Win Battles With The Link To Vote
I Slayed This Kid, & Now Buffy's Jealous - I Didnt Even Need A Post// Ya Ghost Asleep? Cause Your Weak At Wrotes - Ya Lines Look Leary Amend Gets More Scare In Books Label'd "THE PINE-CONE THEORY"// This Mime Dont Hear Me, Kids Backwards - Look At The Fun He Gets Eaten, Then I Threw Up Phil - And Replace M. Witha ton- Of -Brix// Like Summer Skipped, I'll Fall Ya Free's - Better Flow An Ocean Kid Your Like Old Tall Trees, . . .A Mejestic Wonder - . . .NO-ONE NOTICES// .! This Faggots Threw, 'Carrie'd Away - & "There All Gonna Laugh At U" Ya Rap's Rebuked, & Whacha Spat Is Puke - Sick . . .But Now Amend Dont Hafta Chew// |
a clear of example of under elevation from 2002...n Broken Faster..
..for no reason...I merked this bitch like a Ban on Master Blaster jus like Pasta...it only takes a little Steam to make Amend go Soft.. ..this bitch ducked n huddled at the sound of my first Cough... so Fuck off...i thought Amend was male,till he Followed Thru.. ..see i got links on every1,Even my Wakest Verse Beat You but heres a good Will Gesture..scrap this Account N Start Over..... w/ your ass dissed by all, you can't Get a Win by The Luck Of A Clover see I showed Amend what its like...to be Raped and Left to Die... coz w/ your Votes in the last battle...you still got fuked from 2 to 5 |
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aight
opener Phil flow Phil Structure Tie punches Phil(those damn links) Closer Phil overall Phil peace |
WTF.!?
You gotta be kiddin' Uppin for votes. . .REAL ones .................................................. .......................................... |
plz dont sway no matter wots written...
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yo, phil m up took this. he had nice wordplay, flow, and punches, amend you came aight, but he out did you.
vote-phil |
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Amend got this easily. .Everyline was dope apart from the very last one. .The flow was amazingly dope from amend aswell. .I can't believe your voting for Phil. .Geez
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yo dis battle was extremly close, her is the break down
opener-tie metas-a punches-tie personals-a wrodplay-tie structure-phil closer-phil enjoyability-a tie through breakdown, but i was feelin amend a lil more so he gets my vote, fuckin close battle tho, u both got skills.............. |
yo, can you 2 return the favor and hit up and honest vote on these?
thanks dudes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94506 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94982 |
Amend-
Yo B, Its A, And I See How - You Win Battles With The Link To Vote I Slayed This Kid, & Now Buffy's Jealous - I Didnt Even Need A Post// ^^lol...nice opener Ya Ghost Asleep? Cause Your Weak At Wrotes - Ya Lines Look Leary Amend Gets More Scare In Books Label'd "THE PINE-CONE THEORY"// ^^hahahaha.... This Mime Dont Hear Me, Kids Backwards - Look At The Fun He Gets Eaten, Then I Threw Up Phil - And Replace M. Witha ton- Of -Brix// ^^damn...nice personal Like Summer Skipped, I'll Fall Ya Free's - Better Flow An Ocean Kid Your Like Old Tall Trees, . . .A Mejestic Wonder - . . .NO-ONE NOTICES// ^^nice... This Faggots Threw, 'Carrie'd Away - & "There All Gonna Laugh At U" Ya Rap's Rebuked, & Whacha Spat Is Puke - Sick . . .But Now Amend Dont Hafta Chew// ^^eh.....decent... Brix- a clear of example of under elevation from 2002...n Broken Faster.. ..for no reason...I merked this bitch like a Ban on Master Blaster ^kinda played...but decent jus like Pasta...it only takes a little Steam to make Amend go Soft.. ..this bitch ducked n huddled at the sound of my first Cough... ^first line was funny as hell but didn't like the actual punch too much so Fuck off...i thought Amend was male,till he Followed Thru.. ..see i got links on every1,Even my Wakest Verse Beat You ^You don't need to post links....just make a note that the personals are true, no one's loooking up the links anyways lol....but this was a decent personal jab but heres a good Will Gesture..scrap this Account N Start Over..... w/ your ass dissed by all, you can't Get a Win by The Luck Of A Clover ^^played, but pretty good see I showed Amend what its like...to be Raped and Left to Die... coz w/ your Votes in the last battle...you still got fuked from 2 to 5 ^^lmao....this was nice man.... Pretty good battle, one of you had a pretty consistent verse, some played lines, but one really nice one.....The other had a really sick verse, almost each line made me go "ohhhh shit!" so I just gotta go with who had stronger punches/personals, and although this battle was dope I'm gonna give my vote to Vote=amend peace....good stuff from both. |
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