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AMEND 11-24-03 03:38 PM

Brixton -v/s- Amend
 
10 lines
5 votes
due today
check in

-ElocuShun- 11-24-03 03:41 PM

check in...good luck bra..
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-ElocuShun- 11-24-03 08:12 PM

aight bra am gonna have to drop tomoz coz i gotta go ........i'll def drop 2moz pz_______________________________________________

AMEND 11-25-03 03:14 AM

Yo B, Its A, And I See How - You Win Battles With The Link To Vote
I Slayed This Kid, & Now Buffy's Jealous - I Didnt Even Need A Post//
Ya Ghost Asleep? Cause Your Weak At Wrotes - Ya Lines Look Leary
Amend Gets More Scare In Books Label'd "THE PINE-CONE THEORY"//
This Mime Dont Hear Me, Kids Backwards - Look At The Fun He Gets
Eaten, Then I Threw Up Phil - And Replace M. Witha ton- Of -Brix//
Like Summer Skipped, I'll Fall Ya Free's - Better Flow An Ocean Kid
Your Like Old Tall Trees, . . .A Mejestic Wonder - . . .NO-ONE NOTICES//
.!
This Faggots Threw, 'Carrie'd Away - & "There All Gonna Laugh At U"
Ya Rap's Rebuked, & Whacha Spat Is Puke - Sick
. . .But Now Amend Dont Hafta Chew//

-ElocuShun- 11-25-03 12:30 PM

a clear of example of under elevation from 2002...n Broken Faster..
..for no reason...I merked this bitch like a Ban on Master Blaster
jus like Pasta...it only takes a little Steam to make Amend go Soft..
..this bitch ducked n huddled at the sound of my first Cough...
so Fuck off...i thought Amend was male,till he Followed Thru..
..see i got links on every1,Even my Wakest Verse Beat You
but heres a good Will Gesture..scrap this Account N Start Over.....
w/ your ass dissed by all, you can't Get a Win by The Luck Of A Clover
see I showed Amend what its like...to be Raped and Left to Die...
coz w/ your Votes in the last battle...you still got fuked from 2 to 5

-ElocuShun- 11-25-03 08:30 PM

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Rhymes 11-25-03 10:33 PM

aight
opener Phil
flow Phil
Structure Tie
punches Phil(those damn links)
Closer Phil

overall Phil

peace

AMEND 11-26-03 04:30 AM

WTF.!?
You gotta be kiddin'
Uppin for votes. . .REAL ones
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-ElocuShun- 11-26-03 02:22 PM

plz dont sway no matter wots written...
uppin


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deser_eagle 11-27-03 06:06 PM

yo, phil m up took this. he had nice wordplay, flow, and punches, amend you came aight, but he out did you.

vote-phil

-ElocuShun- 11-28-03 10:59 PM

1st...w/ polls...pz________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____________

pot1ent 11-29-03 10:39 AM

Amend got this easily. .Everyline was dope apart from the very last one. .The flow was amazingly dope from amend aswell. .I can't believe your voting for Phil. .Geez

Vote-Amend

da boxa 11-29-03 10:58 AM

yo dis battle was extremly close, her is the break down
opener-tie
metas-a
punches-tie
personals-a
wrodplay-tie
structure-phil
closer-phil
enjoyability-a
tie through breakdown, but i was feelin amend a lil more so he gets my vote, fuckin close battle tho, u both got skills..............

da boxa 11-29-03 10:59 AM

yo, can you 2 return the favor and hit up and honest vote on these?
thanks dudes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94506
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94982

Rappad 11-29-03 11:12 AM

Amend-
Yo B, Its A, And I See How - You Win Battles With The Link To Vote
I Slayed This Kid, & Now Buffy's Jealous - I Didnt Even Need A Post//

^^lol...nice opener

Ya Ghost Asleep? Cause Your Weak At Wrotes - Ya Lines Look Leary
Amend Gets More Scare In Books Label'd "THE PINE-CONE THEORY"//

^^hahahaha....

This Mime Dont Hear Me, Kids Backwards - Look At The Fun He Gets
Eaten, Then I Threw Up Phil - And Replace M. Witha ton- Of -Brix//

^^damn...nice personal

Like Summer Skipped, I'll Fall Ya Free's - Better Flow An Ocean Kid
Your Like Old Tall Trees, . . .A Mejestic Wonder - . . .NO-ONE NOTICES//

^^nice...


This Faggots Threw, 'Carrie'd Away - & "There All Gonna Laugh At U"
Ya Rap's Rebuked, & Whacha Spat Is Puke - Sick
. . .But Now Amend Dont Hafta Chew//

^^eh.....decent...

Brix-
a clear of example of under elevation from 2002...n Broken Faster..
..for no reason...I merked this bitch like a Ban on Master Blaster

^kinda played...but decent

jus like Pasta...it only takes a little Steam to make Amend go Soft..
..this bitch ducked n huddled at the sound of my first Cough...

^first line was funny as hell but didn't like the actual punch too much

so Fuck off...i thought Amend was male,till he Followed Thru..
..see i got links on every1,Even my Wakest Verse Beat You

^You don't need to post links....just make a note that the personals are true, no one's loooking up the links anyways lol....but this was a decent personal jab

but heres a good Will Gesture..scrap this Account N Start Over.....
w/ your ass dissed by all, you can't Get a Win by The Luck Of A Clover

^^played, but pretty good

see I showed Amend what its like...to be Raped and Left to Die...
coz w/ your Votes in the last battle...you still got fuked from 2 to 5

^^lmao....this was nice man....

Pretty good battle, one of you had a pretty consistent verse, some played lines, but one really nice one.....The other had a really sick verse, almost each line made me go "ohhhh shit!" so I just gotta go with who had stronger punches/personals, and although this battle was dope I'm gonna give my vote to

Vote=amend

peace....good stuff from both.


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