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mista raedar vs eMiNeM MiNis
aight its all set up....spit yo shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................................
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checkin in first............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............
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Look at this Eminem wannabe,trying to battle me/
Like Michael Jackson when he just turned white, Its about to get ugly/ This kids going after younger kids Like R.Kelly/ My lyrics is straight fire, got you singing"It's getting hot in herre" like nelly/ You like a fat chick,because your lyrics aint got no curves/ Just call me spider-man,because this wack kids getting on my nerves/ You like a rich kid in the ghetto,because you about to get jacked/ Just call Me Donathan Bailey,cause i''m about to rip up this track/ My lines will erase your bars off my screen like white-out/ You like a low powered light bulb,becuase it's LIGHTS OUT/ |
You made me wait that whole time and thats the best u can do?!/
people no my name but they see urs and say who?/ keep practicin lil man and u might get betta/ all them record labels u sendtracks into and u keep gettin the same letta/ sorry we jus dont got no room keep tryin/ they really mean "you suck dawg leave us alone"...cant u tell they were lyin/ i hope u dont plan on goin pro/ cuz if u do this where it ends....wit my flow/ get off this site and jus quit man ur ova/ cuz u jus ran into the bad ass...a.k.a. "the next h.o.v.a." |
Damn both of yall need elevation harder vocab and methapors but i feel that mista raedar went harder than eminem simply because of the last puchline he had
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both had good punches sum shyt didnt make sense but overall structure my vote goes to minis............................................. .....
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tied 1-1 in txt...1-0 in poll..............UppIn........................... ..........................................
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METAPHORES - mista raedar
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - mista raedar STRUCTURE - mista raedar CREATIVITY - mista raedar PERSONALS - mista raedar OPENING - mista raedar CLOSING - mista raedar MULTIES - neither FLOW - tie OVERALL - mista raedar Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
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yo sum1 else vote...........................uuuupppiiinnnnn.... .................................................. .
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uppin for the last time.....come on n vote.............................................. .................................................. ........................
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punches: mr
flow: mr personals: em structure: mr enjoyment: mr vote: mr hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91879 peace |
yo uppin this shit yo only 2 more votes lets go................................................ .................................................. .....................
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blah, weak battle but:
meta's: mr. had a couple... multi's: niether... flow: mr. , MMM had strecthed lines... structure: same as flow... punches: tie... personals: none... opener: tie... closer: tie... winner: Mister... hit this up wit an honest vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93766 |
overall - mister
enjoyment - none punchlines - mister, barely wordplay - mister creativity - mister closer - mister opener - mister structure - mister metaphors - none Phayme vs Justin Kredible |
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