1liner vs dez.
 

10 lines
you know the drill.


check in.

aight checkin in whats the due time holla back .................................................. .............................................

umm...shall we say 40 minutes from your next post?


-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

done 40 min from NOW............................................... .................................................. ................................

"YOURE~WACK~DAWG, YOU HOG ALL THE WACK YOU WACK HOG, SHIT GETS FOGGY IN THE "FOG"//


^see how stupid that shit looks?


kid thinks hes got dope wordplay... well, i'm not sold
watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold
L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest
9-15 isnt just a record, its also his average bench press!
'gainst Dez hes always less...... like a pint to a gallon
what good'll your e-guns do? i wear an i-vest when im battlin
kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar
new-b posts never even have half a dope punch..


theyre all wack..especially the 1liners


**keyed after reading one of his battles****

You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands
but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand


i'm Grab"n a preist to Bless me Right--- so i can grab all ya D/r's and turn there necks RIGHT
so all you got LEFT is the THEFT that would immediatly ~Supress ya Hype''
like a glock with out tha light--u could obses me for life
u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right
You aint evil or see though SO U COULD NEVER Posses these EYES
AND THATS WHY as u predictid ur only gunna be a Texcee for LIFE

You could neva Break this or~Stop-This-Hammer-
from leaveN you face-less --shot in ya grammar --and show u the tru meanin of Race-ist Prop-a-gan-da

punches- dez
flow- defiantly dez
wordplay- 1liner i guess
structure- dez
vocab- both
opener- dez
closer- dez's closer was funny when ya think about it it's hilarious
made me laugh more- of course dez

final vote- dez

theres my vote and dez wins easliy

i guess this dude Didnt look at were he's from to get my punches
anyways uppin again
Shit i din't even use wordplay
But i get the cat LMAO

I don't even know if i'm allowed 2 vote so if i'm not then just erase it

punches-Dez
watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold
L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest
^^those were the 2 best punches in the battle, both from Dez

wordplay-1liner
You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands
but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand
^^the best wordplay of the battle

i don't vote on structure

Flow-1liner would've won if it wasn't for this-----------u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right
^^^5 times longer then the rest of your bars

personals-nobody
vocab-i didn't really see any from anybody
Opener-Dez
Closer-1liner, because Dez's doesn't rhyme-------kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar
new-b posts never even have half a dope punch..

final vote=3 Dez 2 1liner
Vote-Dez

aight 1liner ya produce sum good shit but ya flow and structure kill ya...follow dez's example bra..
breakdown=
punches-dez
structure-dez
flow-dez
creativity-1
enjoyment-both
metas-both
sustainment-dez..threw more
vote-dez

due to flow n better punches

good battle ya'll pz

opposite of down.



------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

illadelph is like the sun cause we shine with rhymes, underground is like the moon you only see us at times..

flow: dez, easily...
wordplay: 1liner, barely...
personals: dez had that openin personal i guess...
opener: c ^^...
multis: 1liner...
metas: tie...
closer: niether was good...

winner: dez takes this...nice battle though...

hit this up if u can...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94171

punches - dez
personas - dez
wordplay -dez
vocab - tie
opener - dez
closer - dez
overal - dez


1liner what the fuck is up with ure structure man that shit was fucking off really badly...if u gonna battle in elevated atleast try to come nice with structure it's the least u can do homie

no hate dez was too much for you dog
and quantity dont matter only quality

peace hit up my sig with honest vote
peace

Dez be crazy illin'




------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------