Rap~Jesus~ vs eMiNeM MiNis
 

yo sspit first son..........no min/max............................................... .................................................. ....................1............................. .............................

aight checkin in .................................................. ..............
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o wut took so long?

peace

i was eatin lol u no how we do hahaha............................................ .................................................. .................................

My Verse:

This isn’t a ‘lunchroom brawl’ but like ‘food fight’ I’ll hit you up with “beef”/
Fake Em couldn’t “bite” a raw line even if it was written on rotten “teeth”/
Got ‘clocked-out’ because you’re ‘short handed’ ...can’t even past out “time”/
Watch’ me rewind your 1st tried when i beat this “cheap” hoe with a “thrift” rhyme/
Your style’s past-tense, when i pee’d out liquid is the only time you could come a‘head’/
Seeing Ghosts? an early death.. lets say in the 6 but i “Sense” you’re already ‘dead’/
This ‘feather’ weight floats while i ‘duck’ punch-lines cuz i never drown in flows/
Grasp a hold, when i pass by it’s an ‘automatic’ win... cuz i rap on ‘cruise control’//
Why you smiling for... you ‘ride’ so much Dick you got dimples on your ‘cheeks’/
Like ‘blind men’ standing on ‘mountaintop’ you still don’t seem to “peak”(peek)//
I hold the gauntlet and ‘upper-deck’ you with punches but this isn’t a ‘card game’/
This fag has ‘no balls’ to ‘hold up’ cuz this battle is “brief” like “Hanes”//
I’m gonna “end” this guys defenses with a “period.”causing you to ‘men-o-pause’
Giving you gift of a ‘smoke-out’ when i drop shit through “chimneys” like Santa Clause//

reply as soon as possible

peace

damn son chill out and remember who u up wit/
cuz u comin in wit that cocky ass attitude and i dun like it...so u gon get lit/
if you were good or had a nice reputation id recognize yo name/
n u challengin me so ima beat yo ass down till u look like the hunchback of notre dame/
aww wuts wrong now? u understand who u actually no who ur goin up against/
ill beat u and ur crew down wit no sidekick at hence/
im the boy you hear bout on the news...ringin out shots jus for fun/
runnin up afta yo ass wen the cops starin at me pointin their gun/
i dont care if i get 20 years cuz i jus wanna show u how its gon be/
so next time u c my name jus turn away...tell ur friends bout me...eminem mini

uppppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ...............................

u already lost that much times ^^^ ?? lol.

vote - Rap Jesus
structure - EM
creativity - rap
wordplay - rap
punchline - rap
flow - EM
startin - rap
finishin - rap
enjoyment - None
Overall - rap

1ne.

holy emcee battles batman, my vote goes to Rap-Jesus.

explanation...it was just better than the other guy in all categories

uppin 4 votes wwwwwwwwwwwwuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnn..................................... .................................................. .

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wordplay- Jesus it wasn't close

none of it was... cept Em's structure was better

AND take the god damn quotes out of your verse, were not idiots.

vote: Jesus

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Eminem just got clowned..
Not even a close battle a decent battle verse from rap J in all categories....................................
Can yall vote on Un Vs Chem........................

holy shit.. its UnEmCeeAble....


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uppin fo votes......................................
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.peace