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deacon 11-24-03 09:25 PM

so whats your birth weight? soft focus (calisto~deacon~emotion) dont sleep on this
 
Calisto: Mother

Masquerading day to day, deciding whether to cry or celebrate
This breathless wonder within me beats, but congers up such hate
My decision with other’s thoughts, life or death I daringly designate

Cutting circulation, a life on these strings, I reluctantly breathe
Consequences weren’t present within the act of being conceived
But he didn’t ask for this, it was my fault for naively believing

Yet wondering what soul could place blame for such elation
Who could bask in the misery of untimeliness, during celebration?
Wondering how God could bestow a blessing as such devastation?

I’m panicking during the day and wide awake in the evening
Contemplating the realness of this life, if it’s not breathing
But inevitably this precious being from my body is leaving

Deacon: ~Baby~

Caught in-between a decision…
Locked your insides to a weaker minds incision...
A needle with perfect placement implements my stamina
You rectified the problem by killing, did you think you’d reach an answering
Hate flares to an unlucky medium, pick my casket some toilet paper and a soap bar.
Clean yourself cause im dirt...the little in me is hardly worth…
Time to spend happily, encountered through a lovely 20 minutes of ecstasy,
Romantically, You divorced me and cursed me to a death,
I lived inside a wall I didn’t even get to believe I could breathe yet,
I fall, a short distance into acceptance,
Receptive listening you’ll hear me make a splash, im finished
My only touch, confused because pc bullshit…
Retire me from pride to boast a worthless wishlist…
How can you do that when theres nobody witnessing.
Except the man with the green white shirt, “oh him well he’s just visiting”
Worthless tempered fool makes more money than my body was worth,
He scraps me from her insides and claims he loves child's birth…

I hate you, I hate you, reject a single me,
I wish i had a single sight a place where i should be
I hate you, I hate you, infect me with this disease
You wish you had a second chance i just wish that i could breathe

I breathe a breath,
i breathe

Im a seed that lacked its soil, i just wanted to be normal,
God saw a different side of me, saw a light you couldn't see

Emotion: a person who is pro choice



It's her body her choice,
It's Her decision her voice,
A man cant understand this,
How a women cant handle this,
Why should a child grow up unloved,
When it's unwanted, but can be
cherished from above, The love
is a nonetity, The baby was never
meant for an identity, It's a contempt
decision, But are you sure you've
done revision?, Because a babeys
just not a financial obligation, Its
not an assination, God seeks no
retribution,Abortion? Male Pig it's
her decision,She wants to make
a mistake? It's her infliction,


Dont worry about conscience cause' it will slowly fade,
It wasnt youre fault, dont let any one ever call you a
slut cause you got laid,

deacon 11-24-03 10:59 PM

booo upiy up

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Emerge 11-24-03 11:13 PM

dog i hit up ure shit on poetic scriptures would u mind hittin mine up? if u can get ure crew to hit it up that would be nice as well then ill come back and return the favor thanks peace

Emotion 11-25-03 04:56 AM

uppin this ....

Hannibal Lector 11-25-03 04:09 PM

nice shit dogg

Emotion 11-26-03 12:52 AM

what was that...b good for proper reply

Emotion 12-07-03 05:47 AM

wtf??? wheres the replys

pot1ent 12-07-03 09:09 AM

This was a good collab.. Whetehr it was intentional, there was some good alliteration in parts.. The last verse I think was the only one to use mutlis..

A man cant understand this,
How a women cant handle this,

All the people on this collab dropped very nicely.. There wasn't no quotables.. But it did make a good read

Emotion 12-07-03 07:59 PM

thanks^^^

Maven 12-07-03 08:26 PM

reply to three other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread, or it gets deleted. you guys already know this shit.
thanks.

Emotion 12-07-03 10:03 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9840#post969840

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96433

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97001

there you go......

....BaSh.... 12-07-03 10:30 PM

This is one of the dopest collab I've read on here....Calisto cameout wit a dope opener "Masquerading day to day, deciding whether to cry or celebrate" , Hot Line dawg....And his structure , rhyme scheme and content were all nice , he stayed on topic and never fell off....Deacon was also dope , again he cameout wit a hot opener and stayed on that level throughout his verse....Some of his line swere kinda stretched though....But I Liked your style , multis and rhyme scheme...U also had a goodamount of vocab usage....And Emotion's content and structure were dope...His verse was on topic , and his wordplay was sick.....Overall i give this collab a 10/10

Emotion 12-07-03 10:32 PM

cheers for the reply^^^


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