Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!
 

Friendz no more - LM
Scared to Refect - Funn Dementall
Lead or be Lead- Deva

Freestyle

As my brain decayz... I sit down mind melts for dayz
Sit in a daze...Pushed and shoved in so many wayz
I'm crazed....No I ain't lyin' This is my mind set
I can't seem to get a hold of it,My eyez seep wet
Cryin and weeperin, I'm sittin in the darkness
I need to grasp My heart, I'm heartless,Heartless Bastard
I'm a movin target...Movin quick like My name'z Rambo
Otherwize I'll be Burnt on my doorstep like Jill Dando
Merked is not the way I'll be, Dead Like contractin H.I.V
I'm marked for death...My mum screams,"It's not meant to be"
Aspirationz for me...Visionz Of my success in my Life
Too bad I had to succumb to the pain n Strife n Trife
.................................................. ....
The I wake up knock, Knock, Who'z knockin at my door???????
"It'z Big Dave, n we gotta Score to settle, So what'z the score"
...."Nah mate, no hate, I Got the money, Just gimme 3 DAYZ"...
I've been waitin too longh in so many wayz"
Blam Balm.....I went down, No longer king of my manner
He'z beatin me down in my own livin room...I begin to cower
In the corner, like little Jack Horner, Shiverin..........
........."You got 3 dayz....If not, you'll end up missin"...........



Blam......3style expertise



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Feedbak needed on me shit

blah
boring...seen the same stuff hundred time before
try to write about something more meaningful
cos everyones seen the same shit
your rhyme scheme was the only thing worth mentioning in this
flow was good
just saying what i think..

it was aiight it was all that interesting it really seem a little boring

you need different replies for each new thread, fuckhead.
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