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I get my cheese in pounds, everyday hustlin hittin these clowns, plan to be the best look at me now, Young Black we da hottest store the cheese in cottage, we back to the lay the smack down on these cats, relax, we jus came to take some notes, but understand man and know that we ain't no joke, provoke, take a ride in the ocean boat, you know we the hottest thing around so lets go, we flow like da ocean water, pack shit in pounds, playa even in quarters

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you pack shit hahaha lmfao

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didnt feel it, ..

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nice shit dogg

this piece was TERRIBLY basic...

flow was choppy

structure was whack

concept is played

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