Tobias Arnold facing Unparalled
 

I called out for 10 lines. 45 minutes or less to drop. He answered. Using this thread because last one didn't register the poll. Good luck.

He ain't straight, just look at his name, it's mispelled.
It seems that unparalled couldn't spell Unparalleled.
Time will tell about his skill, cept all the clocks hate him.
The sands run out on his clout, can't even beat those limbs. (clock hands)
So why ya comin here? Tryin ta prove you can sling with the best.
Ya simple minded, so I'll use small words, easier for you ta digest.
This man's name represents lines, and the lines are ashamed.
Humiliated that ya rep em, and humiliated over ya game.
Allow this beating to be a lesson, change what ya got in stock...
Cuz puttin that shit on shelves, ensures ya listeners will walk.

Um. No beef or anything. But I think you're going way past 45 minutes. Can you please drop your verse as soon as you can. I'm gonna have to leave soon and I'd hate to not read what you have to say. Thanks.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94235 Can yall please poll dat

Ayo.....Is it okay if I drop my verse later......I had typed up like half of my verse and my computer shut down on me.....So I'll just type it up later....I'm getting offline in a minute....l8ter

Ayo, am I dqed from this battle or should I just drop my verse now....Let me know so I can know what's going on

un u need to drop dog.
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yo check this out man thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93798

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:banghead: :wtf:
Here's My verse........


This guy's a Joke....He can't compare to my |Height| even If he got |Taller|.
Do Not |Choke|,as I Provoke the Insult that this |Blue Belly's| going up In |Smoke| Like |Nightcrawler|.
I'm causing you a |Shortness of Breath|,I'm raps |Cancer| But no |Patches| can Help Ya |Health|.
You're all talk and no actions....So fuckin' wit' me's a certain |Death| like playing |Russian Roulette| by |Yaself|.
I'm |TWO Hot| to be stopped this guy....So I"m |Blowing this light weight away| Like a |PAIR of Bombs|.
This nigga Brave?.....I'ma leave this |Bitch Running|,Like |Prostitutes| in a |Marathon|.:thumbup:
My Ruthless technique will force this weak to cease his speach.
And |Expose his Brains|...when I |Pull his TOP off|....Like |Porn Stars| on a |Nude Beach!|.


|Finish Him!|:cussing:

Blah blah blah blah blah |Blah| blah blah blah.
Blah blah |BLAH| blah blah.

:thumbup: ....L8terz

I can't poll vote yet...but unparalleled took this......although both were weak verses he had stronger punches and better wordplay, etc...this was one sided...

weak battle...but i was feelin unparralled a little more on this one
tobias your shit lacked creativity..it was just too simplistic..the flow was there i guess...and by the way unparalled needs to fix his structure so his verse can flow better...some of your punches were played as hell too, but for some reason i liked your verse better than tobias verse...

therefore poll vote goes to
unparalled...


out

one of the best battles I've seen in the front lines lately...still wasn't tht great tho..

Tobias had a decent verse...I give him much props on actually noticing that the dudes name is mispelled..that's pretty shitty to have a mispelled name...lol..the rest of ur verse was just average tho..after ur opening it all went downhill...not too bad tho...(lmao except u talk about how he mispelled that word when u mispelled the word "CLOCK" lol)

unparalled..u came pretty hard..I don't like ur structure tho, it looks fancy n all but it's difficult to read when it's all chopped up liek that..just write ur ish in a plain style....ur rhymes were alot more complex and u had a few nice punches too....

unparalled took this one..


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95010
^ someone vote on that

peace

hmmmm..not too bad of a battle this was..I might have to say this was a tie..really punches was good from both..flow was good from HEY ARNOLD!!!!..lol..but wordplay was good from Paralleled,,so I have to say this was a tie..I cant vote anyway..but Im just dropping my opinion..

Hit up the battle in my sig..thanks..

Um..........Can we get some votes or something?........................................ .................................................. ............

Er......One more thing :gfy: ......How many votes do I have to get till' this is over?....???????????????