chest plate speech/ keystlye
 

Beast on the keys my speech very heated. RaH sufficate u until u need a breathing treatment. Respitory failure put my 13s where you teeth are. Sore like taradacktals with a sound as rough as tree bark. Most MC's dip they toes in but run for land when they see sharks/
Step to Cavern-Men and get your pathetic team's meat carved/
Keystyle Copyright2003
I've got knockers aka beats for sale
wyzdom@tmail.com
Weak Delivery need not aply

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But this needs some work....work on your structure keep the lines around the same length and add multies and internals to it...Vocab was ok but it needs work as well...for a keystyle this was ok but it needs work....just keep at it and keep dropping.

nice shit dogg

i was feelin this...

structure was horrible

vocabulary was ok, could of been better

using multies could of helped

but i understand this was a keystyle so i won't redicule it too much. just tryin elevate...

now how 'bout hitting this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94104

I gave feed back on kemy$t worp perfect and rob d