Young P VS AMEND
 

Young P VS AMEND

10 Lines...

Usual Vote Rules...

You Know Da Stuff...

One...

Good Luck...

-P

Checkin In. . .
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Uppin

For dis kat to spit. Where you at kat. Im waitin on you. Lets go.

-Igglybuff

spit, im ready
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This Kids A Joke, Battles Blunder'd - Amend Dont Care For Clouts
Plus, Theres Only 1 Thing I Ever Did With Ties. . .Wear Them Out//
So Spare Ya Mouse, Or I'll Drag Ya Click - Kid, Ya Crew Is Boring
I Should Of Saved Time, Absent This - & Have Chrit Do It For Me //
Newbs Snoring, Their Legends Back - & Then This Dudes Ending
& By The Sound Of My Crew - Its Almost Like You Could Be In It//
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in 6.!

Lol... Easy Win...

Now Amends's just-in trouble, cuz he couldnt come wit a verse dat wuz "in sync"...
In comparison, ya verse is always gayer den mine... And i'm da one typin in pink!!
Your on a road to loss or win, and my punches are steerin ya route...
Offered you water for thoughts, and now all three of ya states are experiencing a drought...
Tryna beat a legend but dawg, its hopeless, you wack...
Noticed you slightly changed ur style, but couldnt AMEND da dopeness you lack...
Kid ya below average, so why you up in elite frontlines battlin Brixton...
Amendmc: so yea, your here more then me=FACT, AMEND is ill=fiction...

-Igglybuff

Oh shit young P tore this shit up. hahha amend ive seen better from u and this is a walk in the park for young P

Opening : youn P
Flows : young P
Personals : tie but tie thing is overplayed
Punches :young P
Overall : Young P

U can do much better amend!!

opener: p that was funny
flow: p
structure: p
creativity: am
enjoyment: p
vote: p
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peace

young p took this in every category, i think amend was fuckin about.
young p choose a different colour dawg, i could barely see your verse on my screen.

vote young p

itook the time now hit this up wiv an honest vote:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94501

Amends verse:

This Kids A Joke, Battles Blunder'd - Amend Dont Care For Clouts
Plus, Theres Only 1 Thing I Ever Did With Ties. . .Wear Them Out//
...you obviously dont know the definition of clouts either way wack
So Spare Ya Mouse, Or I'll Drag Ya Click - Kid, Ya Crew Is Boring
I Should Of Saved Time, Absent This - & Have Chrit Do It For Me //
...lol u mentioned chrit meh decent punch not too good
Newbs Snoring, Their Legends Back - & Then This Dudes Ending
& By The Sound Of My Crew - Its Almost Like You Could Be In It//
...did that even rhyme?? not good almost decent

Yung P:

Now Amends's just-in trouble, cuz he couldnt come wit a verse dat wuz "in sync"...
In comparison, ya verse is always gayer den mine... And i'm da one typin in pink!!
...lol not good but funny punch haha
Your on a road to loss or win, and my punches are steerin ya route...
Offered you water for thoughts, and now all three of ya states are experiencing a drought...
...nice punch
Tryna beat a legend but dawg, its hopeless, you wack...
Noticed you slightly changed ur style, but couldnt AMEND da dopeness you lack...
...lol nice personal
Kid ya below average, so why you up in elite frontlines battlin Brixton...
Amendmc: so yea, your here more then me=FACT, AMEND is ill=fiction...
...meh worded very wrongly nice idea though still

vote - p for punches and personals that were present and better verse overall

By Da Way

Wut is a clout? LOL. I had no clue. Thanks for votes. Uppin numba one.

-Igglybuff

lol im lovin the pink!!

Opener-funny P
Punches-P
flow-P
perosnals-tie
closer-P
Overall-P

--p.s Pikachu is better than igglypuff ;-)