McProfit vs RHYMES
 

blind spit
10-15 lines
due 30min after check in
honest no bullshit votes
3-0 ko


















checking in






peace

its off mcprofit

you pussyed out

































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Yo I'm checkin' in. You gonna spit first or me? Thets use the same rules as ya battle with the last cat who pussed out. Aight.

aight so its the rules we followin blind spit























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I'm gonna spit first. Aight check it:

Yo Rhymes wanna battle, cause you gay like the color Lav'
It's ironic you called Ryhmes when it's the thing you don't have
Hey don't get mad at my flow, I'm like a crow
I pick pick a apart at ya slow mo, with my fo-fo
Get ya ass back to preschool you about to get had
If I lyrically kill you, you won't like me when I'm mad
Gettin' depressed nigga who's next
You can't get erect, it'll atke a sec for me to bust out a tech
Pullin' the trigga on this nigga, yo stop runnin, I stayed
Bitch if you go up against me, you about to get sprayed

(open)

Frontlines pullin bulletes like flowerests rippin roots from the DIRT..
Throw the mic Machedie sharpen it beetwen your front grab in beetwen your teeth...

(...continues...)

I run through you like 1000volts... heart attack stroke kill you before you die...
Print out this battle roll it tight.. i jus no your gonna get it pretty fuckin high...

My rhymes are dope these dope rhymeswill get you stoned twice...
Stop mumblin over tyour own verses your stumblin Jus pray to christ..

Breakdance?? bitch it looks like your fallin to the mutha-fukin ground...
Your nuthin..with less then 100 posts..u should jus rost and stay underground...

(finish)

I'ma take you and burie you in Textual Territory cemetary its over your lady i FLURT...
I through a pad and pens while others through mics and dicks wen they lower you 6 feet BENTH...


Open and finish rhyme for those who cant figure that out

aight mad this was tight
lets get votes







your not bad


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please do not poll vote
me and mad will figure shit out
thanx

jus tell us who you vote for

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rhymes: don't do wat u did wit tha open and close, it just doesn't sound right, plus, up ur game a whole lot...

madman: u need to elevated period, don't use thug flows when u battle...

overall winner: rhymes, although both need a lot of elevation...

hit this up though so it can stop sleepin...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94171

METAPHORES - Rhymes
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - Rhymes
STRUCTURE - Rhymes
CREATIVITY - Rhymes
PERSONALS - madman-doubleSS
OPENING - madman-doubleSS
CLOSING - Rhymes (other guy's is played)
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - madman-doubleSS

OVERALL - Rhymes

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392

aight thanx both of you


but i said not to poll vote cuz its fucked up



o well i'll get it fixed








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...battle wasnt special..heres the breakdown
punches=rhymes
flow=rhymes
sustainment=rhymes
metas=rhymes
overall=rhymes
took the main cats.................

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PZ..OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN

I MEAN HIT THIS UP...SORRY FOR THE FREEPOST..PZ

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94394

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