It vS. Meters
 

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It just zones out & clears his mind 2 drop something deep from the soul...


OK here we go meters...minus U down 2 negative beyond zero
U will B so morbidly cold & bitter...that no 1 will call U there hero
U trying 2 swing at me is like trying 2 fix lifes problems...impossible
Yer loss is tossible like cheap salads...try 2 B dresing & its lossable
my wordplay is thick paste...as for yas is sauceable & not possible
Im the boss...take orders from me when i tell U 2 fall into a portal
Im immortal...as for U a mortal...ya skills easily killed with a pistal
Slash ya verbal rip wit a crystal sword...mash U wit a 4by4 board
Im the lord ya battles bow down 2 me...pick U up & throw u soard
Put leters of acidic bacteria in meters...the sickness displayed & u toared

blah...

no haters
no d/r
no crew votes
all votes must b explained
due date like i give u another 15 min
no bullshit
reg rules apply
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come on dogg drop ya verse...u dont want to be a pussy do you
you excepted my callout...so follow threw or everybody will no u a faker
come hit me harder dogg and show me what u got or ill just save this verse for another battle
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come on bitch u have 5 more minutes asshole
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why the fuck accept if u not gonna drop and shit dogg

Outdid *it* as *it* was 'bout to go down/
He thought he was an emcee king so I knocked him in the crown/

Here comes the lyrical pound, the message in the bottle on the shelf/
What's going on? I...think he merked himself!/

It is reading too much fantasy, he sounds like J.R.R. Tolkein stoned and it's plain to see/
We'd all be lucky if an orc came by with a golden staff and slayed
him violently,

It was worthless, in scrabble it only got two points/
But then meters came along, double word score, tripple those joints/

I annoint you, FantasyGeek1, take your gift, take your thrown, take it now/
I'm with the Welcoming part of rapbattle.com and i've come to remind you to keep your head down

finally dogg uppin1
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i think u both need to improve but my vote would go to Meters cuz he had a little better punches and it flowed pretty good, "ITs" shit didnt flow that good and it just rambeled on

VOTE--Meters

Hit this back wit an honest vote, *****ONE*****

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...71&pagenumber=2

i think both had good flow and wordplay, but meters had better punches. both need to elevate though, supposedly.

lokk at my battle with yaz and give an honest vote thanksssss!!!!!!!!!!!!

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U fools are fuckin retarded
those votes dont even count
worthless attempt to explain shit
faggots
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uppin2

yeh nice battle
results:
i rapped both to a beat to check da flow...nice nice but meters woz a touch better
liked his rhmyes much better too, dey juz came together nicely.
i ddnt really like da line bout j.r.r tolkein..seemd to geeky for me haha
but da rest woz gud from meter
for "it" i ddnt like da way it flowd..i ddnt like da rhymes to well
it woz gud content n stuff ...but i ddnt like da structure of it..feel me?? its hard to explain wot i really wanna say but...
da punches n stuff were good..both need some upping though

so i vote for meter...came harder, better punches n rhymes plus flow n structure

peace