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TAG 11-26-03 02:46 AM

TAG v. Tökën
 
8 lines max
No crew/hate/unexplained/BS/DR votes
I'll spit now you spit when ya can

TAG 11-26-03 03:06 AM

Tökën, When I toke ya you'll be blazin: Smoken
Your spirit will be like ya muthafuckin neck: Broken/
This leader of the Black Ties is a waste of my time dude
Only time I'll wear black is after I Lyrikally Murder you/
At your funeral, You boyfriend might toss a rose on your grave
I'll be like Rambo dawg and toss a fuckin hand granade/
Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasure
A couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever

Token 11-26-03 10:45 AM

You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd spark
But like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark
Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes)
You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists
You're it.. Just like every Tag leader.. Everyones running from you
Ashanti had to put a jewish cap on ya.. Just so she could rock wit jew
You're just not dope.. Like drug addicts smokin a ciggarette
You cant run with the big boys.. like racers with torn leg ligaments

Slim Thug 11-26-03 11:17 AM

Holy shit. Well both of these guys are my home boys so im gonna lay this out catergory based.

Punches: (Tie)
Personals:(TAG) I didn't see many personals from Token
Flow: (Token) took that by a little bit
Opening:(Token) You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd sparkBut like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark
Closing:(TAG)Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasureA couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever
Creativity:(TAG) He got this catergory just because he used a few personals. Token had a few punches i've seen before where most of TAG's where personal so it was a little more creative.
Win: So overall after a close battle im gonna have to say my vote goes to TAG ( Hard decision )

Slim Thug 11-26-03 11:18 AM

lol sorry about all the faces I did : an ( so it came like dat .

Token 11-26-03 11:23 AM

He had closer? Sex lines are played as fuck man... what u smokin?.. i hate newbie votes... uppin 1..............

AJ 11-26-03 11:28 AM

Punches-Token
Flow-TAG
Peronsals-TAG
Wordplay-Token
Structure-Token [TAG / is bad]
Opener-TAG
Closer-Token

Overal-Token
Not a bad battle at all, Token dident really seem to give a shit, buth e still won, props.


Hit this up for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89126

Token 11-26-03 12:26 PM

thank you... you forgot to poll vote... uppin 2................................................. ...........

1liner 11-26-03 12:57 PM

Well as i predicted Token Came out hard and Did his sdizzle

Tag you came better than normal but Tokens verse was str8 illness

Anyways Nice drops by Both

Vote=Token

Due 2 a entirely better verse

MP~PHASIZ 11-26-03 01:15 PM

METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - Tökën
STRUCTURE - TAG
CREATIVITY - Tökën
PERSONALS - TAG
OPENING - TAG
CLOSING - Tökën
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - TAG

OVERALL - TAG (Close battle though)

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392

Obscure 11-26-03 01:17 PM

Opener-TAG
pucnhes-Token
flow-TAG
structure-token
wordplay-token
closer-Token

Good Battle -.-Token Came Harder.. Props to both

Slim Thug 11-26-03 01:23 PM

That shouldnt count. Its a big time hate vote haha good luck token and TAG .

MC2 11-26-03 01:34 PM

FlowTag
Personals Token
Punches Token
Metas Tag
Creativity Token
Enjoyment Tag

I would say a tie but it has to go one way or the other

Vote=Tag

menolin 11-26-03 01:37 PM

Opener-tag
Closer-token
Punches-token
Flow-tag
Peronsals-tag
Wordplay-token
Structure-token
overall-TOKEN

nice batte peeps but thats my breakdown of the battle.


plz return the favor and vote for the battle in my sig!!!

Casual 11-26-03 02:05 PM

Flow - Neither... felt like each bar was individual
Personals - TAG... attempted one
Punches - TAG... coupla kinda fresh ones
Multis - Neither
Meta4s - Token
Originality - Both/neither
Structure - TAG... consistant bar length
Opener - Token
Finisher - TAG

Vote = TAG

Kinda close all round but TAG takes it based on personals an punches.

Good battlin fellas... hit this upp now plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91262

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