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TAG v. Tökën
8 lines max
No crew/hate/unexplained/BS/DR votes I'll spit now you spit when ya can |
Tökën, When I toke ya you'll be blazin: Smoken
Your spirit will be like ya muthafuckin neck: Broken/ This leader of the Black Ties is a waste of my time dude Only time I'll wear black is after I Lyrikally Murder you/ At your funeral, You boyfriend might toss a rose on your grave I'll be like Rambo dawg and toss a fuckin hand granade/ Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasure A couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever |
You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd spark
But like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes) You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists You're it.. Just like every Tag leader.. Everyones running from you Ashanti had to put a jewish cap on ya.. Just so she could rock wit jew You're just not dope.. Like drug addicts smokin a ciggarette You cant run with the big boys.. like racers with torn leg ligaments |
Holy shit. Well both of these guys are my home boys so im gonna lay this out catergory based.
Punches: (Tie) Personals:(TAG) I didn't see many personals from Token Flow: (Token) took that by a little bit Opening:(Token) You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd sparkBut like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark Closing:(TAG)Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasureA couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever Creativity:(TAG) He got this catergory just because he used a few personals. Token had a few punches i've seen before where most of TAG's where personal so it was a little more creative. Win: So overall after a close battle im gonna have to say my vote goes to TAG ( Hard decision ) |
lol sorry about all the faces I did : an ( so it came like dat .
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He had closer? Sex lines are played as fuck man... what u smokin?.. i hate newbie votes... uppin 1..............
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Punches-Token
Flow-TAG Peronsals-TAG Wordplay-Token Structure-Token [TAG / is bad] Opener-TAG Closer-Token Overal-Token Not a bad battle at all, Token dident really seem to give a shit, buth e still won, props. Hit this up for me: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89126 |
thank you... you forgot to poll vote... uppin 2................................................. ...........
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Well as i predicted Token Came out hard and Did his sdizzle
Tag you came better than normal but Tokens verse was str8 illness Anyways Nice drops by Both Vote=Token Due 2 a entirely better verse |
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - Tökën STRUCTURE - TAG CREATIVITY - Tökën PERSONALS - TAG OPENING - TAG CLOSING - Tökën MULTIES - neither FLOW - TAG OVERALL - TAG (Close battle though) Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
Opener-TAG
pucnhes-Token flow-TAG structure-token wordplay-token closer-Token Good Battle -.-Token Came Harder.. Props to both |
That shouldnt count. Its a big time hate vote haha good luck token and TAG .
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FlowTag
Personals Token Punches Token Metas Tag Creativity Token Enjoyment Tag I would say a tie but it has to go one way or the other Vote=Tag |
Opener-tag
Closer-token Punches-token Flow-tag Peronsals-tag Wordplay-token Structure-token overall-TOKEN nice batte peeps but thats my breakdown of the battle. plz return the favor and vote for the battle in my sig!!! |
Flow - Neither... felt like each bar was individual
Personals - TAG... attempted one Punches - TAG... coupla kinda fresh ones Multis - Neither Meta4s - Token Originality - Both/neither Structure - TAG... consistant bar length Opener - Token Finisher - TAG Vote = TAG Kinda close all round but TAG takes it based on personals an punches. Good battlin fellas... hit this upp now plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91262 . ... ..... ... . |
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