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Slim Thug 11-26-03 03:50 PM

YungHeadwrecka vs DeadlySpitta
 
Rules:
15-20 Lines
1 hr drop time
5 - win
No Crew/Dr/Hate votes
Drop same time No prewritten write yo verse and drop when u can - holla

DeadlySpitta 11-26-03 04:06 PM

Aight... y'all niggaz know who i am... DeadlySpitta a.k.a J-Day of Wanted DOA Records... Its about to go down....

-Opener-
YungHeadwrecka.... its about to go down
DeadlySpitta spittin deadly witout a sound
Its ur repo man... and ur eviction notice....
Tha whole Head Wreckaz crew cant even toke this....

-Diss-
U have a lot of heart of wantin to fight me
Be like me but in tha end u wanna prewrite me
My bars of fire will keep a niggaz head spinnin
But ur girl's pussy... how many niggaz done been in it...
Tha slash on ur verses shows ur newbie status
Satisfaction cant be givin to u by Trish Stratus...
I take one look at ur words... and u got me thinkin...
Show mercy.... or leave him in an alley stinkin
IM bout to drop heavy... now u know its all finished...
I'll leave u like my last few few victims... fuckin perished...

-Finisher-
D-O-A u'll be dead... while Im alive....
Dont think against me that u'll survive
MC2 of ur group was just an example
But this time I'll hit ur ass wit more-than-a-sample
Ur not meant to be in tha same crew as an ill patient...
U got a betta chance in Florida wit a Hatian....

Slim Thug 11-26-03 04:10 PM

Fuck Spitta, Kids just a shorty...So I'm Rippin This Elf/
your lines are more forced than Virgins Fistin Themselves/
Spittas that cross me dont live long, So stay in a stance/
cuz Text is like leg strength...Kid ya dont stand a chance/
I'll put color to this faggot when I turn him black and blue/
I'd strike with personals but FrontLines never heard of you/
Damn my verses killed u now ur really a "Dead"Spitta"/
quick somebody go tell lyrical soldiers that DS is a Quitta/
Yo Conclu$ive beat u 2-0 and u thouht u was runnin shit/
I mean, This kid gettin dissed would be considered a compliment/
I'm Sick..Punch ya back n' count how many times ya Spine Clicks/
it's sad..the greatest thing to come outta YOUR mouth was MY Dick/
Slice you so deep your flesh falls of and your Bones Cut/
Then write a verse infront of you with your own blood!/
Aight I'm past this Nigga, Spitta...I'ma fill 'em wit shanks/
Till I see whats behind ya chest with you still in the way!/

Slim Thug 11-26-03 04:14 PM

Tha battle between the 9-2's haha good luck DS that was a iLL verse from both of us .

Wi11y Na$D@Q 11-26-03 04:21 PM

yo the first kid bars wasnt set up for the punches its liek he was just typin words that flowed together no real hard disses u didnt get at dude u was battlin...


second kid c ame with it first bar on so yup


vote= second guy

Slim Thug 11-26-03 04:31 PM

Uppin for some votes maybe? .

MC2 11-26-03 04:37 PM

Fuck Spitta, Kids just a shorty...So I'm Rippin This Elf/
This ight but elves aren't small
your lines are more forced than Virgins Fistin Themselves/
So that made this sound a little hypocritical
Spittas that cross me dont live long, So stay in a stance/
Good flow
cuz Text is like leg strength...Kid ya dont stand a chance/
Flowed well from previous line ok punch
I'll put color to this faggot when I turn him black and blue/
Funny
I'd strike with personals but FrontLines never heard of you/
Funnier
Damn my verses killed u now ur really a "Dead"Spitta"/
Also good
quick somebody go tell lyrical soldiers that DS is a Quitta/
Aight
Yo Conclu$ive beat u 2-0 and u thouht u was runnin shit/
Good flow
I mean, This kid gettin dissed would be considered a compliment/
okish rhyme
I'm Sick..Punch ya back n' count how many times ya Spine Clicks/
Good
it's sad..the greatest thing to come outta YOUR mouth was MY
Dick/
The line of the battle
Slice you so deep your flesh falls of and your Bones Cut/
Graphic
Then write a verse infront of you with your own blood!/
Nice
Aight I'm past this Nigga, Spitta...I'ma fill 'em wit shanks/
Nice bit o viciousness
Till I see whats behind ya chest with you still in the way!/
Dodgy rhyme



Aight... y'all niggaz know who i am... DeadlySpitta a.k.a J-Day of Wanted DOA Records... Its about to go down....
Get off your own dick

-Opener-
YungHeadwrecka.... its about to go down
Basic
DeadlySpitta spittin deadly witout a sound
Silent but deadly yeah good
Its ur repo man... and ur eviction notice....
Ok
Tha whole Head Wreckaz crew cant even toke this....
Dodgy

-Diss-
U have a lot of heart of wantin to fight me
Ok
Be like me but in tha end u wanna prewrite me
Good but a bit played
My bars of fire will keep a niggaz head spinnin
Ok
But ur girl's pussy... how many niggaz done been in it...
Dodgy rhyme
Tha slash on ur verses shows ur newbie status
Ok
Satisfaction cant be givin to u by Trish Stratus...
As Yung said forced
I take one look at ur words... and u got me thinkin...
Good flow
Show mercy.... or leave him in an alley stinkin
Ok
IM bout to drop heavy... now u know its all finished...
Good flow
I'll leave u like my last few few victims... fuckin perished...
Dodgy rhyme

-Finisher-
D-O-A u'll be dead... while Im alive....
Good flow
Dont think against me that u'll survive
Bad flow
MC2 of ur group was just an example
I'm not in his group but k
But this time I'll hit ur ass wit more-than-a-sample
I thought the verse you wrote for me was better
Ur not meant to be in tha same crew as an ill patient...
Ok
U got a betta chance in Florida wit a Hatian..
Okish

So vote=Yung

Spitta you need to keep elevatin an not rest on your laurels.

C-Lo 11-26-03 04:58 PM

yo Headwreckas verse was tight, u got some crazy disses ex... the elves and virgins fistin themselves) both were tight i gotta give it to both of ya'll good battle, my vote goes with Wrecka

Twizted Ayngel 11-26-03 05:10 PM

haha.. aiight my vote goes as follows...

flow; Yung
punches; YUNG
multies; neither really..
overall; Yung

to me.. punches are what wins a battle.. n yung took this.

Young P 11-26-03 05:20 PM

Basicly

YungHead got dis jawn for punches. Though DS had a few good punches he didnt stay consistent and wuz more elementary. So im ago wit Yung for dis vote...

-Igglybuff

Young P 11-26-03 05:22 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8775#post938775

Peep Mine

Wit an honest vote as well. Thanks.

-Igglybuff

eMiNeM MiNis 11-26-03 05:23 PM

YunG took this wit his punches...........ncie verses tho they were both tight......................hit this up honestly..........................http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94568


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