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" My Thoughts " ( Peep this shit )
“ MY THOUGHTS “
I’m trapped in a stripe jack-it, No straps but Locks and latches Only capable of using my mind, Eternity to practice Beef causin static, But im repelled from the action My first thought is there death, but that’s just a fraction I’m a mind of worries, reality continues to go blurry I would call for help, but would they hurry... (Police Sirens) I’m in a position where my emotions are slippen Doing cycles of circular motions in repetitions My Soul Itchin, but what the use is of quiten Can’t speak my word to the world, will anyone listen Some days, my mind approaches the paper with a block The clock still ticken, wanting verses to be in stocks… I’m nearing the end, friends acting as convulsions Explosions of hate, but crawl back into implosions My motions slowin, as my muscles start rotting Body aching and breaking, death now plotting I’m not ready for the end, is there ever an exception 1 last question, may lead to an opposite direction… (Sound of Wind) I’m welcomed to hell, with torture, despair, and Revolutions A constant war with-in itself, but never seems to be loosen Not only bruises, but open gashes and limbs missing Magma spitting, axes catching contact, bodies now splitting I didn’t come here for sin, this is my destiny The Blood of my own, is added to the recipe… But it’s endless (Fading away through hell ) ~LINKS~ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9447#post939447 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9450#post939450 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9457#post939457 |
yo i was feeling you kid ...you could use better punches but the work you did was hot none the less.
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Thanks homie, Nice to here that from a vetren on this site. Thats on the real. Can I get some more replies homies...
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UPPIN ^^^^
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This was a good drop and it went smooth. I can picture a beat and to this. It's good skills.
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Thanks hommie, I appriciate this. Uppin for more replies.
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this is the first of your shit i have read
personally, i hope they are all as good as this man real dope 8/10 |
Yea, all of my flows are this good or better. LOL. Uppin for some more votes up in here plz.
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ayo playa... shyt came off nice... good flow lyric's an all good ass ish pimp... keep ya game up... rep solid... on3
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Thanks for the replie hommie. Hey, show me what you got in the Open mic. If your better in here, we could use some people on the open mic and topical battle area of our crew. Aight hommie.
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yeah i es felin rthid, bu thought tit couls use some complexity in ya shit. but ya got potential kid...likin it so far,....expand...look forward to see'in more...Pz./..........
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sorry bout the bad vocab, but im pissed
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LOL, its straight hommie. I was able to to read the whole thing. uppin for some more votes, and suggestions for me to work on.
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yo i was really feelin this verse. ya rhymes and vocab depicted real skill. i like pieces about "my thoughts" i do em alot cuz its just a good form of expression and its cool to write about when u dotn got a specific subject..
you got talent dawg |
Thanks alot hommie. I will go check your raps out. Since we have a similar state of mind and all of that. Thanks alot hommie, Uppin
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