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Want to be free
Niggas can't hate me cause i want'a be free/
I was trap up in this hell abou't 100 degress/ I don't agree to all the charges that these haters brought against me/ Too much dow too much clothes but the coc I jusy don't know/ Strap everyday and everynight turn on the lights/ When i get on the stage usually i'm rocking the mic/ In the drought season a nigga would starve my weed ain't growing/ so i result to violent measures sprayin my gang on the wall/ Just a sign for telling niggas don't you come around here/ If you wan't to see your mom listen up and dissapear/ My goods my little secret always stash in the car/ Under the hood talking bou't my coc so i guess i did lie/ No time for playing games nigga time is money/ I learn that age 5 selling candy like the chocolate bunny/ Reasons for the dumbings tell me if you find out/ Till then i'll be making money, driving a lexus, playing the xbox/ Time to talk if you go against the team/ Tie you up in the chair and soak you up in gasoline/ Watch you burn in flames i frame one of my foes/ Talking bou't you was here and there they ain't what the report say so/ So you off to jail i'm off the hook this could be one good book/ But until the day i die i'll be making money fuck that other shit/ |
not bad at all im not feeling the topic but you have the talent to get peoples attention.
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Flow Fell Off In Some Places, As Did Ya Rhymes. Some Of Your Bars Didn't Rhyme, Add That To The Some What Choppy Flow, And Those Are The Negatives. I Did See Some Positive Tho, You Got Some Talent. Multi's Were Good When Used, Vocab Was OK, You Can Up If You Wish. . Ain't Really No Big Deal Tho, Vocabulary Don't Make The Piece, Content And Flow Does. Speakin Of Content, You Was Lackin A Bit. I Wasn't Really Feelin The Piece As A Whole, But I'll Be Lookin Out For More Drops To See You Elevate Aight.
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