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Women
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0809#post940809
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0813#post940813 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0816#post940816 Before you hit ya teens all ya need is mechanical machines Toy soldiers plastic guns living life full with dreams But then you hit 13, suddenly it fades into the distant Becoming an adolescent, an instinctive young delinquent Then the finer sex glow bright with a contagious kinda light Ya get urges and impulses, you just wanna spend the night Excited thoughts, obsessions you can suddenly see Set forth on the journey ahead to maturity set free Just turned the key to pleasure beyond anything before Ignore ya parents, just make sure ya lock ya bedroom door Once ya started it needs feed, to coin a phrase it breeds Blond, brunette, redhead, Asian, Chinese or any greed All ya want is lovin, sexy women gotta keep em coming Next thing you know “fuck bitch” there’s a bun in her oven Cos in Irresponsibility lies a lesson aint just good times But that’s another rhyme, this ones on women ‘the easy kind’ You soon find in fucking that with the good comes the bad A lot more emotion, more than lust with sessions compared Cos their brains work different, minds indifferent in some ways You’ll never understand them, like finding the end to a maze Women…some are good lovers and don’t cause shit While others cause shit and make bad lovers, Some make good mothers, while others smother Cos Women……...we all need lovers As you get older ya get bolder in the playing ways Ya pass the times of novelty, ya just entered the next phase Ya a bit older think you learnt some tricks of the trade But ya still too young to fully comprehend how to evade Now ya tactics change attentions turned to pull’n in clubs Racking buds, eyes on young ladies n droppin love doves All over ya on the dance floor performing erotic moves Soon as it goes further, they soon dance to a different groove This sorta gets ya thinkin, been sleepin round for awhile I night stands after another, morning makeup’s looking vile Endless sex is all good, but early leaving without meaning Doesn’t seem to hit with the hardest screaming feeling Cos A relationship settles ya, strengthens and makes ya strong But ya only touchin on the feeling, afraid ya getting it wrong They fuck wit ya emotion they don’t only screw with ya cock They pack up leave there back then again ya dropped Cos when ya young love is quick and it’s just as fast to stop Women…some are good lovers and don’t cause shit While others cause shit and make bad lovers, Some make good mothers, while others smother Cos Women……...we all need lovers I step older so a new set of rules to playing the game The scores have changed, now im looking for more than fame The time has come to root not run settle down for good Find n fall in love, seal it with the vows blessed from above Cos You’ve played and been played seen a lot of wild women So collect all of their good point and to a stunner give em The ideal woman you’ve found, yes you’ll know in ya heart With Missing beats, bounds and leaps, could this be the start Just Embarked, its goin good, its different from the past Flawless passion both happy and feeling totally relaxed Ya take the next step, move in and share all ya possessions This time you know its true, learnt from all them past lessons No Confessions completely at ease, so what does that leave? That you’re the perfect partners, a true integrated weave So Ya hit it on the head, knocked the final nail into the bed Ya found the perfect woman to love for life until your dead Women…some are good lovers and don’t cause shit While others cause shit and make bad lovers, Some make good mothers, while others smother Cos Women……...we all need lovers |
dope expression about the topic. you know what you must do now. find that some one and flow the song to him/her.
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Long but good expressed thru the topic, some good immagery , ..flow was off on some points, ...but it was an ok read..
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Not Bad.......I was feelin the topic and your transition from younger to older........you had decent flow and it was worded quite nicely.......I'm happy to see you took a more respectable and honest route with this this topic.......the chorus tho' I wasn't really feelin that much and it was a little long maybe this just needs to be heard.....and I agree find that special someone and perform it to her.......she would probably melt.......good shit.....keep elevatin and stay up
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yo man. only one word to describe this. and that one word is "dope". I was feelin this the whole way through flow was there I thought some decent vocab and multi's and wordplay. rhyme scheme was tight and like always so was ur structure but like Dulce said the hook needs some work but other then that dope shit bro. keep on reppin CV brotha. peace.
forgot to mention about this part Ya found the perfect woman to love for life until your dead it may seem like that^ until divorce comes along lol. naw juss kiddin. lol |
Yeah man i agree this was a good drop.....it was long lol but it made a good read, definitely worth it.....Your structure was really nice in this i thought nothing really bad about it....Your vocab was nice as usual lol....but overall this was a good piece...keep at it.
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i liked this piece, had good immigery a good flow and an overal great base on the topic...keep it up pz
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thnx people, appreciated.....Pz
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can i get some more feed here like.............Pz
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i know its long but still.......it aint that long........Pz
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