pine-cone vs tag
 

yom, rules are 5-10 bars, no line merking, no hate votes, no dick riders votes,,,,,,


voteing criteria,

intro-
punches-
metas-
structure-
personals-
finisher-

line merking is a loss of score.

my lines make you dizzy like a guy bag TAGED,
stumblin structure like a newbie with a KEG!
leave you wondering weather to neg,
takeing it from a guy named bubba, FAG!
brain freeze make your thoughts lag,
confussed, bleedin like a girl all over a rag!
with construction worse than a midget NIG,
meant for something BIG, but still came up short!
with rap waves so quick, your vision i will distort,
like a gym teacher, i cut ya, sayin sorry sport!
like school bocks your lines are tired and used,
so boring and stupin they make ya wanna snooze!
and like a jew with a star in a history mag,
smile cause you've just been fuckin TAGED

yo tag you better hit dis up sometime soon, 4 days to vote......
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yo tag must be chokeing cause i sent him a pm with the link like 2 days ago............................................... ...........
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FUck you why would I choke? I've beat you twice already. I was home fo thanksgiving where we dun have the Internet. Checkin In

ok dog, i'm cool with dat, just had no clew if you were commin or not...............................................
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shit i forgot to post an explanation for my verse,
k here it is
-nig=neigger
-rap waves is a metaphor for light waves, the quicker and shorter the light waves the more damageing they are, expecially to eyes
-and jewise people are tagged with a star on themselves, called the star of david

This kid is whack his rhymes are played man, fuck this snow-cone
Cause his lyrics are cold like Vanilla Ice, bet they come from his outdated drone (his sig)
Get your losing record outta RB, if ya care at all fo your health
This battle is mine the only chance you'll win is if ya set up a battle wit ya self.
You called me out piss-cone and a vet stepped up
Like a virgin you bout ta get ripped da fuck up
I'm the light in the night like weed I'll leave ya blazin
Amazin how you got cracked and smacked by an Asian

alright verse, i've seen you de better, adn in my oppion your finisher was weak, but ok, let the voteing begin, and yo tag, me and this_mofo_aint_playin are starting a new crew, "MC's'R'US" i'm giving you and invatation, ive seen you put out some dope shit.................if you wanna join pm me, if not, thats ok as well

I'll think about it. uppin (1) .................................................. ..................................................

I will vote in this piece as soon as somone votes in on of the battles in my sig, aight hommies. And nice verse Tag, still doing the damn thing LOL...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

uppin fo people to actually vote lol .................................................. ..................................................

My vote goes to TAG, because he came with accual punches. Cone, ya verse was straight. But I felt that you didnt attack him enough. Your structure was straight. But in battles, punches are what wins it. Go hit my battles up and make a vote on them hommie. there in ma sig.

Vote = TAG

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

uppin fo votes (2) .................................................. .................................................. ............

uppin 4. Please hit this up .................................................. ..................................................