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dw. 11-27-03 02:03 PM

dw vs E-Lyrical
 
10 lines
all rules

u spit first

E-Lyrical 11-27-03 02:18 PM

Yo...

Somebody grab me a gun that's fully loaded, dw's ryhmes aren't ill, they coloured pink and sugar coated,
You remined me of a baby learning to crawl, 39-41 record, but yo rhymes have no originallity at all,
Cause yo balls r to small, stature splattered on the wall, only friend is yo daughter's doll,
Why do u try when ya gonna loose? Yo rhymes r already used, lyrically abused,
Blood running outta ya ears, beers to queers you've wasted yo years,
This punk-ass fucker is just tryin to piss me off, he lips me off, makes me get the dissin off,
I lived your pathetic life, fucked your wife, and gave you yo suicide knife,
Now you know not to fuck wit me, yo cry helplessly, so don't fuck wit E-Lyrical lyrically!

Not great w/e

dw. 11-27-03 02:41 PM

e-lyrical illiteral spittin no vocab..ur wack n its pityful...
snap ya arm limbs wen i dislocate...lukin 4 ur wins but can't locate..
can't believe you believe u belong here why did ur mum consieve..
stretchin lines..no personals..stop typin someone chop off his meta~tarsals...
E-Lyrical? that name is far from the truth like sayin jay's album is racist..
i must be facist cos u ugly as fuck..only gettin ice from the dentist..
an apprentice in this game ur lame...its a shame..
..ur mums ashamed of her mistake n still tryin to explain..
record bout to double..imma cut u like the first time u shaved ur stubble..
...runnin into trouble u ain't spittin u jus blowin a bubble//


for the dumb fucks:-
*meta~tarsals= end of fingers
*jay-z new album=the black album
*brace from dentist

dw. 11-27-03 02:42 PM

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!1

Quelude 11-27-03 03:04 PM

Well, what can I say? Dw you ripped him. Props
Your structure, wordlpaly, vocab, and skill level were all out of reach for "other guy"

No contest.

E-Lyrical 11-27-03 03:04 PM

yo, good battle dawg. Good luck wit the polls...............................Uppin^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^

E-Lyrical 11-27-03 03:31 PM

Uppin (3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

deser_eagle 11-27-03 04:19 PM

dw ripped this nigga without a doubt. e, you came a lil too soft. ya lines were elementary AND played.
vote-dw

Rhymes 11-27-03 04:52 PM

dw
better
wordplay
structyre
nice opener
flow
injoyment=tie
creativity=tie


overall dw



peace

Rap~Jesus~ 11-27-03 05:08 PM

punches: Dw
flow: Dw
structure: Dw
creativity: Dw
personals: Dw( by far)
vocab: Dw
wordplay: Dw
enjoyment: Dw

1 sided but was aight!

peace

E C C O 11-27-03 05:43 PM

What can i say.........i aint ashamed to finnish this poll to make it 5-0 to DW cuz all the above is correct...................

personals and punches were spot on and i enjoyed D's much more...........
VOTE =DW


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