dw vs whiteRwrong
 

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u spit first

YO YO YEAH I USED TO WATCH THAT SHOW TO DW./ WHAT WAS THE NAME OF IT OH YEAH DARKWING DUCK, YOU SUCKED UP CLUCK, AND I GO EVEN GIVE A MOTHER FUCK, ILL RAN UR PUNKASS OVER WIT MY CHEVY TRUCK.

ALL RAISED UP IM STUCK IN THE AIR ,IM BEHIND YOUR GIRL MAN PULLIN HER HAIR, YEAH IT WAS UR GIRL SAID MY DICKS GIGANTIC, NYMPHOMATTIC,LEGS SPREAD OPEN ITS AUTOFUCKINMATTIC,CRACK FUCKIN ADDICT, MANIC DEPRESSENT , SMOKE ALOT A CRONIC SO I CAN SUPRESS IT THE FUCKIN WAY,THE WAY THAT I FEEL MY FIRST NAMES ROB AND MY LAST NAMES STEELE, I HOPE YOU LISTENED TO THIS STORY CAUSE IM ABOUT TO KILL ANY MOTHERFUCKER FUCKIN WIT MY RAP DEAL.....

lol ^^^was that ur verse, well o.k i'll drop 5 quik lines,

wot the fuck was that..like fightin ceilings u hit the floor wiv a splat...
whiteRwrong definately wrong..was that a verse or a freepost gone long...
rip out ya insides so u can decide how to make ur heart beat wiv a distinctive vibe..
hide while i seek.. u in the shadows like im jay n u memphis bleek...
u'll neva hit a peak like a blunt mountain...
spittin like a fountain..while u the equivelent of a water shortage sproutin..
this was quik didnt need to take time..its a defenate sign..
wen i didnt know it was ur verse or a freepost which happened to rhyme//


i know that was wack but it didnt need to be any beta,

uppin!

ARE YOU FOR REALS HOMIE LIKE THAT WAS ANY BETTER, YOUR
RAPS AS STALE AS SOME MONTH OLD CHEDDER IN MY FRIDGE,
IF I RAPPED LIKE THAT ID THROW MY SELF OFF THE BRIDGE, AROUND THESE PARTS THEY CALL ME MR.NICEGUY, TO SPIT LIKE THAT YOU MUST BE FUCKIN HIGH,, BUT THEY DONT CALL ME THAT
FOR MY PERSONALITY, YOU KNOW THE REAL REALITY, YOU TRY TO FUCK WITH ME OOPS FATALITY.

HELLO MC FLY SPIT BACK UR WACK ASS LYRICALS SO YOU CAN GET FINSHED BY THE GREAT WHITE MIRACLE......

flow:dw
structure:dw
disses:dw
personals:=
vocab:=
punches:=

Vtre:DW

hit dis up honestly i took time to hit yours
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=94638

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

dw won this....better punches...personals....flow...everything

plus he didnt post 3 verses....

my vote - DW

and dw check out both battles in my sig and hit em up both wit an honest vote....once on of em is finished we can do that topical battle..iight...thanks yo

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Vote DW
I dont even need to read your battle WhiteRWrong uses the same lines in all of his battles
Vote DW

3-0 uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!1

yo hit this up dogg!!!


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93798


i'll hit yers in a minute dogg!!!
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Since whiteRwrong posted 3 different verses, I'm using the one he posted first when voting.

METAPHORES - dw
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - dw
STRUCTURE - dw
CREATIVITY - dw
PERSONALS - dw
OPENING - dw
CLOSING - dw
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - dw

OVERALL - dw