mista raedar vs. Metaphorm
 

Consider this my check in.

100 characters is gay, gay, gay, gay, gay, gay, gay, gay, gay, and guess what else.. gay.

chin checin............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........

Missed the Raedae:
you accepted my challenge, you can't take it back, watch this fake react,
it's funny, you been here since July, and everyone still thinks your wack..
rapping is your hobbie, not your career, you're really just a shelf stocker,
thinking you're hype, you could be silk the egg and not be a shell shocker...
damn dogg, your last opponent must've knocked all of the sense out of you,
'cause wantin' to battle's as dumb as tryna bust a nut drinking Mountain Dew..
ya girl told me you're too small, no big deal for you, it's just so long jergens,
'cause you the type that goes to prison just to drop the soap on purpose..
shit, when these disses strike, they're toward you, remember it's for you,
man, this kid gotta advertise in his sig just to get some members for his crew..

I just figured I'd up this real quick since it was already on the third page.

100 characters = gay

METAPHORM DISS-

This,bitch probably doesn't know what a metaphor is,look at his name/
Leave this kid homeless,dancing in the rain/
This kid surrounded by more bars then 50 cent in 21 questions/
Just call me the teacher,because this bitch is lookin for a lesson/
Duck under your desk,because my lines will blast through your speakers/
Blast this kid like a US trooper with heat seakers/
You rap about da old school i rap about the future/
This battle about to get ugly like a fat gurl with no features/
Got this kid wobbling,like a fat nigga tryin to do the harlem shake/
Leave this bitch breathless,like a dead Body under the lake/


THIS NIGGA GOT RIPPED ....WHAT!!

DA UNDEFEATED KINGZZ!!

R.I.P METAPHORM:
1924-2003

REMEMBER THIS BITCH IS OL'SCHOOL ^

Sigh another weak ass battle but here it is

Opening: Metaphorm (A typical personal but it was better then raed.
Punches: Tie (Meta had overplayed lines and mistas just sucked)
Personals: Metaphorm had only 1 but raed had 0
Flow: Tie (Neither held it well)
Creativity: Raedar a lil bit
Overall: Meta
Closing:

hmmm shit....

I'm not going into great detail but..

Metaphorm had a nicer lookin verse but lacked substance....mista raedar atleast had 1 creative line...the 50 cent line was creative but not that hard....the rest of his verse flowed tho.....I'ma give it to mista...it was close tho..not necessarily good tho..

vote-mista raedar

Opening:Meta
Punches:Both
Personals: Meta
Flow: Both
Creativity:Neither
Overall: Meta

Vote-Meta He Juss Came Harder I Thought

this battle was one sided

v/meta
his verse was better his punches his although some played...he had way better structure...he had atleast one personal..

mista..u needa elevate ur structure is wack and u got no punches or wordplay..u try to be creative but u lack it alot..anyways my vote is

v/ metaphorm...

Pz

Vote Meta...

He Came Nice With A Few Played Concepts
But He Still Murked The Otha Kid, Tha Otha
Kid Had Nothing No Punches At All.....pZ

meta took this with his eyes closed sorry to say.. he spit more veteran and had a kick ass closer on you.. you gotta realize that future and features doesn't rhyme try to be creative but keep the flow going vote.. Meta