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kautious vs Explict
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no biteing no feeding no recyclying no dick riders no hate votes ------------------- im gonna start on it soon so get yours in and don't no show------------ check in |
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“Deconstruction” -something u used to- im breaking you down
Like the avatar you showing on rap battles -boy you just a clown- I’ll decapitate and take your crown if you think your some kind of king Couldn’t be elevated wit wings cuz on this site ur really just one of the smaller things Bring conditional heat randomly roundly like explosives or erupted springs Or worse yet flames in palms that connect to you with every swing Hurting ur ambitions with fatal attempts completed in every move You have nothing to prove when you can’t improve explict lost his groove Remove the stupidity of this battle, and you would probably only see my verse Explict wouldn’t exist –brains to mist- like our styles is too diverse ----- Flash of electricity im controlling the amplitude of shock in this war Coming raw splitting your core leave your body in gore Hart torn worse then virgin pussy in a black mans porn Crying like you was born im not showing sympathy Empathy to win has you filed a dead emcee Theirs “No doubt” u “don’t breath” get what im saying Cuz if all my words where bullets of course I be spraying No cheap talk u a motha fucka quit while you alive Cuz “I can’t stop and won’t stop” only the strong survive A merk in the making, took time to type murder and now you jus shakking |
You'll need more-than just weapons
as I lay this sword on ya neck then slice the vocal cords till your breath vents, The only emcee as wack as you is YOUR OWN REFLECTION now I'm Ragin with Hatred as I'm maimin this fake kid, leave this lame in amazement with razor-blade-facelifts, then 'collapse his vertebral column' to justify the way he BLATANTLY SHAPE SHIFTS Delivering the wrong name (Kautious) you were Born with Bit Rhymes to the Core I Split Spines and toss you in a crowd of leperds so you can learn to Form a Sick Line I'll flip your notions with fists of motion that pulls your intestines through your heart to leave you with Mixed-Emotions I'm like a fired assassin thats steadily gettin hype with the blastin, I would've responded sooner but I cant seem to type when Im laughin collapsin-this-geek claimin he's strapped for the street while the only caps I bust will leave you SNAPPED AT THE KNEES and packed with some pleas, I'll set ya hands on fire and make you applaud so you can say you've 'CLAPPED-WITH-SOME-HEAT My shits ripe from the source, you'll get sliced into fourths, my rhymes bring the coldest-combination that'll implode this abomination... I'll slice your tounge out and put it in your Hand if you wanna 'HOLD-A-CONVERSATION, I just BURNED JEW like the HOLO-CAUST(HollowCost) |
damn close battle, flow tie creastivity tie, structure kautious, punches kautios overal this battle went to Kautious props to both of you...good battle Vote K
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u know im here just wanna battle so someone get at me iight
ill spit a lil top let yall know were im at iight yo i stay wit tha right tool like i work in home depot/and i spit enough to were tha fluid will float ur boat/and i cant give a nigga to much rope /he might be suicidale and hang him self/now i aint spittin nomore cause its late and i aint got nothin else |
uppin for some honest votes............................................. .................................................. ..........
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well i dont have 100 posts but the mods allowed me to post in elite battles so i am sure its ok if i vote
i think both were ok, wordplay was kinda off, flow was a bit choppy on both but i gotta say that explicit took this with nicer punches the mixed emotions line was hot as well as the hold a conversation line vote explicit |
aiigh dawg thanks for the vote even though u cant poll.. i appriciate the vote.............................................. .................................................. ................uppin (2)
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yo came 2 drop a link dogg
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kautios ripped explicit a new ass hole
he had the best punches definitly the best flow too vote-katious |
aight yo we need more votes on this
nice verse explict no droping links inless you gonna drop a vote and don't post a verse that no ones gonna look at freeposts need to be erased uppin for votes 1st.... |
aight yo we need more votes on this
no droping links inless you gonna drop a vote and don't post a verse that no ones gonna look at freeposts need to be erased uppin for votes 2nd.... |
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aight my breakdown
I think X went a lil overboard on who he was facin I believ X was Outdone b/c of Xperience factors Break Down Open-K Close_X i guess Punchs-K Personals_K Flow_K laughsX Vote-K plz return tha Fav http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95135 |
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