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e.coli vs 1liner
5-6 bars (10-12 lines)
1 hr time limit no crew.........hate........d/r votes check in explain all votes |
aiyo ill hit this battle up later when u both post but could you please hit up the too battles in my sig wit an honest vote..there gettin slept on...thanks alot yo...ill be back later and hit this up honestly
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Aight Checkin in Dawg
let the best one prevail hollaa 100 thing s 1oothings......................................... |
things to know........i already beat 1liner.......his crew is doi------definition of illness.........thats about it
1LINER SIT BACK AND ENJOY YA MERKING wit ya record.....ya oppenent has a better chance of winnin then u do.... its thanksgiving....im handing out L’s go ahead take number 2... like a virgin wit out a dick in this battle youll never score... he compares himself to a faggot wit aids.... ...now he thinks he has ill metaphors... youre stuck.....like ya flows ya merked list just dont add up.... 1liner is a bitch...u just cant tell cuz she is sportin an A-cup... 1liner plus e.coli equals merking...this battle is gonna get gory.... hes been gettin his ass kicked since birth...now thats his-story...(history) 1liner gets no action....before he dies he just wants 1 kiss.... ya crew is an antonym...they are the definition of whackness.... with the multiple L’s im handing u....u can say im a generous giver... like a bitch who cant get pregnant in this battle u will never deliver... MERKING COMPLETE |
I' spit Fowl Vowels inta ya mouth-to chew threw ya bowels
EatN ya Stomach OUT like NIGHT Owls on the Prowel E.coli-more like a She-4-life- diseased infested With 3-more-types of GENES injested-Yes u guesd it- 1line's gunna bleed this Dike after this battle wE can shake and make A-mends/ I may break ya FACE and say you MAKE no sense(cents) But if i steal ya~Gate~ Then Dont take a-fence(OFFENSE) My mission is the divisoins of incisions/ in his visions So i Box-in this Exibition till i Stress his Condition till he look ugly'r than a modern art masterpieces artist Rendition |
yo here is the break down,
opener-tie personals-tie punches-e-coli metas-1 liner structure-tie closer-e-coli overall-e-coli close battle, 1liner if you hadn't of had those 3 line bars than you prolly would have won, close. but overall e-coli one this, my vote goes to him. |
oh shit, i forgot to explain why structure was a tie, at first glance e.coli's structure looks good, but he has a half bar,and goes over the line limit he set, so thats why.......... props to you both.......................................
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pine cone..........that is not half a line it is all 1 line.........and there is no way personals were a tie.........thanks anyway.........and justin kredible u bitch get the fuck out of my thread u garbage ass newbie suck a dick
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^ha this nigguhs madd cuz i diddnt vote for him............nigguh get a prozac 1liner ripped u, and sorry if you cant see that
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first off ya stupid ass vote dont count anyway...........u need 5 wins to post in here newbie.............and i didnt get ripped homo
stop postin in my thread u are gay and garbage |
Heres How It Is
Flow: Tie Punchs: E Metas: 1 Structure: E Enjoy: E Vote: E-coli Wasnt feelin 1liners style..forced multis and punchs wernt to strong he just had some nice metas...e-colis got the better verse..more structured..better punchs..much easier to read http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94835 hit that up |
should be 2-0 me
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