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Ape .vs. LM
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3-0 KO 4-1 TKO 5 wins No hate, crew or dr votes No feeding No recycling Due by Saturday |
Checkin' In. I'll drop by later tonite probably.
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Alright dawg I'm checkin in. I'll drop before saturday. Fuck it...I'll just keystyle somethin here and now. I'll post ASAP.
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Here's my verse:
Dawg you so whack I find it amazin you've actually got a win... Coz muthafucka your bout as much use as a shark with no fins... Due by saturday so you can search my profile for things to spit... Well I'm gon' bring some shit bit by bit coz your punches dont hit... Your a fuckin pussy, just quit, leave here while your unknown... Your in a whackness league of your own, your in your own zone... In your home you sit alone measurin out lengths duct tape... Coz your plannin rape on apes just to say you've screwed animals in bed... Oh shit have I let your secret out, dont get embarrassed and go red... Oh yeah I forgot to mention, I read your two battles, haha you verse fed... |
You better drop a good verse after all this waitin............................................ ...
Peace!!! |
LM straight verse, hard punches nice floh good structure.......
overall nice verse....... i'll drop a poll when he replies........ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95085 but drop a poll here........ |
^^^ Yep, another dick rider on the loose.
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^You just need to Drop a verse, i'm giving feedback and asking you'all to peep a battle, nothing is wrong with that... Like I said, Go ahead and drop a verse.
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^^^Yep, another vote swayer on the loose.....bitch stop compainin and get this battle finished........... |
After Im done, the Alphebet will now and only have 24 Letters/
My verse will Piss you off so bad, ya pants will just get Wetter/ I ate all of ya Punches, good thing my favorite was Wild Strawberry/ My punches knock out ya teeth, call me the Tooth, but you still the Fairy/ K and N will be Peeling you off the ground from my Bannana Clips and shit/ Paradox liked ya verse, but to me, it seemed like ya Computer had Glitches/ How you sopose to Throw Punches when it looks like ya typed with a Machanical Hand/ My verse translates to the Bombs, have you more Blown Up than the Michelin Man/ The way my rhymes Sun you, people think you came from the Equator/ I will easily hand you a 8 in ya lose column, faster than a group of Tony Hawk Sk8ers/ A little something, I'll have my votes by tonite. |
Damn nigga, I tore ya verse up! Okay, let the voting begin folks.
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punches came better with ape
flow came with both personals came with LM Ape had the more interesting verse, with more metaphores and shit like that for ex. "I ate all of ya Punches, good thing my favorite was Wild Strawberry" < thats what i like to see voté--== Ape |
1 up me. Have to use my old name since I fucked around with Ape and did some shit to it. I'll have an Admin. get it back for me soon hopefully. But I'll use this name until I get Ape back.
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LM...man u got over 1000 posts and still no talent...not hating just being honest....u had punches..but they were weak..ur best line was basically like a filler line...and u have over 1000 posts so you have to have some kind of experience....there's no excuse for that verse.....
Ape..ur verse was pretty weak too...but u had an excuse to slack off b/c u saw what you were up against..u also had a few decent punchlines....nothing special tho....but u took it.. vote-Ape |
Psh! Get outta here with that link.
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