battle whiteRwrong v mc pinacle
 

7-10 lines
normal rules
times 2
you,me,you,me
its on you round 1......

yo yo MC penis,
I mean pinacle you bout to get dissed by the
"great white Miracle"!!!
check it yo yo its round 1,
sittin in da california fuckin sun,
why you turn around and start ta run,
my flows as tight as a virgin nun,
dont be afarid of ur daddy son,
wheres all ur comebacks---what ya aint got none
ur raps played out like a giligans island re-run,
ok ill stop--im fuckin done, you got knocked out in

ROUND 1

1ST ROUND KNOCK OUT AS E-40 SAID"I HEAR SILENCE" YOU GOT KNOCKEDOUT"DOMESTIC VOILENCE
 

sorry bout that..heres my verse

whats this name, whiteRwrong?/is it a testimony that you're lyrical skills are strong/

so, act out of your place and you'll submitt to these verbal lacerations/i'll rip your whiteness so hard, it'll make your ass look Asian

man, nothing can compare with my intricate thoughts/I'll manifest into bacteria and your rhymes will rot/

im a newbie to rapbattles but i aint gonna be simplistic/my flow owns an undescribable aura, an eerie mystic/

and whenever i commend a mic, the composition withers/the forces of nature even cringe when i deliver/

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METAPHORES - MC PINACLE
VOCABULARY - MC PINACLE
PUNCHLINES - MC PINACLE
STRUCTURE - neither
CREATIVITY - MC PINACLE
PERSONALS - MC PINACLE
OPENING - MC PINACLE
CLOSING - MC PINACLE
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - MC PINACLE

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why isnt people voting?fuck.................it would take 5 minutes to vote and explain why.............will somebody vote, please?????????????????????uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppp ppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for votes(4th time uppin)

pinnacle got this battle..easily..he punches was better and was more advanced than whiterwrong..white didnt really diss pinnacle..and thats what you suppose to do in a battle..so pinnacle gets my vote..

hit up the battle in my sig..thanks

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opener:pinncale
closer:pinnacle
punches:pinnacle
wordplay:pinnacle
enjoyability:tie- pinnacle was good, the other 'lol'
structure:none, both were wack
overall:pinnacle

aiight

keep elevatin you 2.

peace

um, thanks for tha vote but you forgot 2 poll it.......................100 charactersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssss

lil choppy on all ends but i think pinacle took it, both need to attpem to restructure, so easy to read and flow, its really choppy still

METAPHORES - MC PINACLE
VOCABULARY - MC PINACLE
PUNCHLINES - MC PINACLE
STRUCTURE - neither
CREATIVITY - MC PINACLE
PERSONALS - MC PINACLE
OPENING - MC PINACLE
CLOSING - MC PINACLE
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - MC PINACLE