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One More Chance (Feat: LM). . Dope Collab. .
In The Chorus, We Split It Up. As You Can Tell, LM Did The First Four Lines, I Did The Last Four. First Verse Is Me, Second Is LM.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Formula: "Fuck This Man, I Need To See Her. . " LM: "I Feel You Cuz, I Need To See Someone Too" Formula: "Shit Ended Sour Man, Fuck All This, I'ma Get Her Back. . [Chorus] What do I gotta do to get you back... I refuse to face the facts that our friendship had cracks... Trust is what was lacked and it cost us dearly... I really wanna make it work, I speak sincerly... I See Things Clearly, Gotta Have You With Me Wanna Be More Than Friendly, I Wanna Have A Kid See Please, Take The Time Out To Peep My Honesty Cause Honestly I Wanna Be Back With You Mami Formula As I Write This Letter. . Damn I Let You Slip Away Sight Was On Cheddar. . Man, I Let You Flip N Stray I Dip And Pray. . . God I Was So Fucking Stupid Without You, My Exsistence Is Fucking Useless Your Persistance Was Ruthless. . I Didn't Notice I Chose This, Now I've Wrote This. . So You Won't Be Hopeless Lemme Focus. . . On What I Did Wrong So I Can Mend And Bring The Silence To End. . Further Than Friends? Who Knows, But Now My Love Grows. . And Trust Me It Shows My Life Blows Without You. . . My Lightbulb Went Out Too Don't Know Any Ideas Or The Exact Shit To Say Or Do But I Stay N Wait, I'm True. . . I'm Feelin You Now My Pencil Pounds The Paper As I Get These Words Out Get These Words Down. . You Need To Know I Share The Same Feelings You Did When You Once Cared You Once Stared. . . Gazed, Told Me You Loved Me You Would Hold Me N Hug Me. . . I Ain't Think I Was Lucky Never Wanted A Step Futher Than Friendship. . But I Declare That If My Penship Doesn't Prove It, Goddamn Girl I Care. [Chorus] LM I feel like I'm walkin a line between life and death... As I walk further it gets harder to take my next breath... Without you I have nothin left to live for... All I wanna do is go back to how we was before... Before we argued to til we couldnt take no more... The friendships ended so raw and I feel like shit... I admit I called you a whore and feel bad bout it... Maybe we both need to change a little bit... Coz otherwise I'll always think 'I let you slip'... I lost my grip and lost all I had in the world... I lost the #1 girl, I was so stupid to lose her... I cant believe how badly I treated her, I shoulda known better... I shouldnt of got obsessed and not let another man get her... It wasnt fair on her, I realise that now... I'll get her back when I figure out how... I had her before but I fear I've lost her now after all the times together... I hope not coz one things for sure, I love you forever... Hopefully we'll calm this stormy weather... Then I can say 'we losin contact never'... [Chorus] Talkin To The End Of The Track. . Formula: "If You Ain't Realized It Baby, I Love You, Everyday I'm Thinkin Bout Chu, I Gotta Have You Wit Me, Nah I'm Sayin? I Smoke L's Everyday. . Funny Cause That's The Letter In Ya Name. ." LM: "Gotta See A Smile On Ya Face, I Did Wrong, Now I'm Mendin The Situation. . Come Back To Me Girl. . I Can't Take Much More Of This Time Without You. . " |
i think this was hot lm surprised me and form cam with it...both did great peep my new ish...... nuclear concepts present
as for the 2 of you i can tell this was well thought and both fallow rap and poetry formats i like that it shows a well educated mind. |
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Lyrical Mobb- Yo What You Think Gwan YJ- Holla At Cha Boi Masta C Feat: MC Uski- No More Feedback Is Appreciated. . I'm Feelin Good Bout This Piece. . That Verse Could Be One Of The Best I've Written Lately. . I've Also Noticed That My Ass Is On The Love Tip Alot. . . Formula Is A Fucking Lover. Wrd. -Formula. |
Yo. . Word Perfect. . I Don't Understand Your Reply. .
lm surprised me and form cam with it ^^ Huh? -Formula. |
lm surprised me i thought he might not be able to sound as good with a person of his capability......meaning you
and you brought alot to the rhyme set him up to match perfectly with your delivery |
Yeah i agree with Word this was a good piece here.....Both of you came nicely i thought....Both structured there verses pretty well...Formula had some good multies in his and the flow was nice...LM had good flow as well and i liked the content in LMs....Overall this was a good collab..keep at it.
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Pretty sick drop...Both MCs cameout nice and stayed on topic....Nice wordplay and the content was iLL
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That was tight. I feel both of you on this piece. Both of you came with good vocab and it flowed well. You both added alot to each others part. This was nice. keep droppin.
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Word Up, Thanks For The Feed. Glad Ya'll Feelin This Drop.
-Formula. |
nice collabo
formula had good multis vocab was ok LM flowed nicely nice chorus 8.5/10 keep droppin! |
nice collabo
formula had some good multis vocab was alright LM flowed nice 9/10 keep doin ya thang ya'll peep this 2 battle pLZ(honest votes) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94943 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94950 thx PZ |
Word Up, Feed Is Appreciated Greatly. Drop Links, Favor Returned.
-Formula. |
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9/10.......<----That's what I like to see. Formula, me and you kick ass. |
This was a ill ass collab. The vocab was good. I liked the topic and everything about it. I didnt really catch any weakness. It flowed as if it should be an audio. I like dis shit
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This Wasn't Bad.. Nice At That. I Liked The Concept
And You Guys Worked Together Well. I Like This The Chorus Was A BIT long Tho. So THat Kinda Put A DownFall On It.. Overall Not Bad Here.. I Liked It hIt thIs http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=95318 |
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