|
Stand Strong -- Song Done In Studio
|
yo...i ain't gonna lie.
ur flow needs a lot of work. it'll get better after ya voice cracks. HAHA...ur friend makes u look a lot better. also, the lyrcis r garbage. no offense, but they r. go to front lines n start batlin. 20-30 battles n u'll be 10x the lyrisist u r now. finally, the beat was coo until i realised it wasn't goin to bust out. u don't have the skill to carry a track like that yet. better off practicin wit bangers n try find out how to bring heat. don't stress thou, ur young, so u got lots ofg time to improve ya game...just put the time in. pc |
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA MAN IM ALL EARS FOR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM N SHIT ... AND I AGREE MY FLOW NEEDS WORK...BUT MAN HAHAHA MY LYRICS ARENT GARBAGE R U JOKIN..DID U EVEN LISTEN TO IT MAN..MY LYRICS ARE CRAZY....
IM NOT A BLACK CAT BUT DONT CROSS PATHS BITCH// YOU RACIASTS SAY SHIT BUT CANT SWITCH ME PLACES// FUCK WALKIN IN MY SHOES YOU CANT TIE MY FUCKIN LACES// ILL FLIP THE SCRIPT LIKE ITS DOING GYMNASTICS// BEAT ME IN YOUR DREAMS BITCH BUT RIGHT NOW YOUR AWAKE// YOU OBVIOUSLY NO NOTHING BOUT RAP MAN JUST SHUT UP |
Ha! Phate Dosent Know Anything About Rap? Phate Is The Best Beat Maker On This Site, Shut The Fuck Up.
This BEat Wasn't Great...Way Too Slow, And SHould Break Into A Banger... ...Yes Your Lyrics Are Garbage...You Need To Work On Pretty Much Everything...Use Fatser beats To Work On Flow... ...I Most Replied BEcause You Said Phate Dosent Know Rap.. ...Fuckind Idiot...Shady16...Kiss My Ass Fucker..Phates Better Then You'll Ever Be.. ...That Is All... |
you sound like ur at least 14-15 somin like that
are you hanging around fuckin 2 yr olds? man he must be young im only 15 but dam my voice isnt that weak...shit LOL the beat?....what the fuck is that...no beat fukin classical... chorus?...a baby could do better flow...i thought i had no flow but dam u make me look like 2pac a2z add me on aim: ZanySkillz... i needa tlk but yeh shady u must be very rich to get in a studio cuz ur deffinately not good enough to get in by skills... Pz... |
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA get off his nuts man
|
hahahahahaha WOOOOOOOOOOW methods your gay man .... Ill fuckin crush you, you nigger i did get in by skills...
|
I did get in by skills and im leavin this bord your al haters that dick ryde n shit...
so talk all shit..im not coming back to this post PEAACEEEEE |
^^YAY one less herb...:)
did the people who had the studio..were they retarted?...well to let herb that sucks like u in must've been..lol i dont dick ride unlike u and ur 2 yr old friend...u could never crush me if u think u can fuckin set it up....ill rip u the fuck up u racist man Quote:
^^^ ur not white if u are u must be fuckin scrawny or jus weak be gone herb |
whatever shady....u have 2 songs uploaded, how many recordings have u made. 4-5...how many verses have u writtin, a dozen....maybe.
u just got in the game n u think ur dope. hmmmm.....read up on any rappers history n find out how many made it in their first 4-5 years of rapping. if u think ur rhymes don't need elevating i don't give a fuck....good luck wit it. but u'll elevate a lot quicker if u realise that every rapper startin out is shit...n needs to develope skills. |
Shows how muh you know man .. k look at it this way ... imagine if my song was like
the sky is blue// so are you// do do do// thats how i rapped when i first started..lol..mmaybe not that whack but still... and yes im new at recording..but ur wrong about the " a dozen verses written " ive been writtin for 4 years..and i know my audio needs improving..but u say my lyrics are garbage man?? k .. u make it sound like any old loser cold write my stuff..i put lots of effort into it..theres LOTS of good metaphors and punchlines and ryhmes schemes if u were paying attention.... like come on give me a break |
DAMN, this shit is wack, one of my artists just ripped this Beat on his Album comming out, click the link below to hear it. Your flow needs alot of work. The second guy is HILARIOUS, sounds like all the little kids at the junior high putting out cds hahaha fuckin little hommies...do your thang...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=95260 |
Flow 3/5
Lyrics 2/5 Punches 2/5 Beat 3/5 Overall 3/5 The flow was alrite, punches were a little weak, your voice is wack, stay up |
thanx
uppin |
u suck. really really really really really really really really really bad. god damn ur voice cracks me up. sounds like a girl. and it sounds like u aint used to swearing....like ur mom instilled a noncussing moral heavily on you.....lmao....dude quit rappin NOW
|
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:14 PM. |