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yungone Vs Young Tears
-5 to 10 line Battle
-No Bullshit Plz |
yo young tears da faggot start sheetting tears.....betthoven a say u a dicracce 2 battlin and he cant hear....wat dis faggot cat wanna do 2day..i beat him down sweep him down turn him into billy holliday...imma kill u witout question wit out askin...if u wanna lay down i turn u ova 2 michale jackson..hurry up end dis fagg let me grabb my 5 votes....they on here correcting yo grammer and u diving 4 notes....beat u down like lewis did tyson and extra harley down features....beat u so bad u start talkin like charlie browns teacher...when they give me da W wat u goin shed tears and cry....have a nice day wit yo loss ok bye bye
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There's No Way Young One Can 'ESCAPE-MY-BARS' You Must Be Thinking From 'FAR' Cause ill Really Leave You In The DARKNESS And Let PRIESTS 'RAPE-YOU-WITH-SARS'!!!....
Young's A World Wide MC This Kid Must Be SPIDERMAN Cause His Always 'STUCK-To-THE-WEB' Battlin Me Is A Death Sentenace So Consider Yourself 'FUCKED INSTEAD'!!!...... My 'TEXT-IS-REAL Young One Must Be Rapping With MONKEYS In Court Only Time He 'GETS APPEAL'(A-PEAL) U Contradict Your Stars To Fool People Thats Ur 'VET-SKILL'!!..... Me Throwing Herbs Is The Only Time U Get A 'DEAL'(DILL) I Aim For The 'KILL' Its Clear Young One And Humpty Dumpty Both Got Somthing In Common They Both So 'UNDER-THE-HILL'!!.... Blah.....Key'd |
my vote goes to TEARS to lazy to break it down far but ill try my best...
YUNG>>> U need to structer better lik how TEAR set it up cause its easyer to flow nad read and the easier it is to read the more ppl will feel u. Overall punchs where good and the brown thing was funny but still evulate man. TEARS>>> liked your structe u had one really crappy force multi tho ..PRIESTS 'RAPE-YOU-WITH-SARS'!!!.... otrher then that part it was ohky u should build up a bit more for the end tho but nice spit to both VOTE TEARS ~PEACE~ |
tears had better structure both had ok punhces if i could vote i would vote for tears but i need more posts
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this was a nice battle kna mean
opener/tears closer/tears worth battling/both worth readin/tears punches/tears overall/tears nice punches tears look forward to battling you in da future holla |
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My Vote- Young Tears
Reason- Came Alot Harder, Good Structure Too ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// |
opener/tears
closer/tears worth readin/tears punches/tears overall/tears if i can poll vote i would vote for tears nice verse yo |
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