my first 2 freestyles in english
 

thats it,im gonna kill evry enemy i got
the last man who went aginst me got shot
cause the world sucks evrything is rotten
death on the door knocking
rocking,my life turning me crazy
im gonna be big,do u inderstand me?
do you feel it,its greatnes getting close
im so excited,dont belive me?,feel my pulse
im tierd being a horse,doing evrything for evrybody
remeber me friend,the name is d-money
for real many,im the best there is
evry fucking enemy gets down on his knees
asking "please",but i'll kill him anyway
cause greatness comes with hard work,not on a silver tray









evry enemy i got,im gonna killem,im spitting my rhymes to much venom
i come in many forms im fucking random,like a candle im burning till im done
im like a grande i will explode you better run,its such mother fucking fun
im burning,im shining,like the fucking sun,im trying,but its just to hard
i love the money'u can call me green card,im terring my self a part
i'll blow u away like a fart,you retard,i'll kill you in a split second
u wanna be like me?,dude learn the method,cuz me without rap is like a candle with no flame
im holding a gun nigga to ya head im gonna aim,i got fame,you got shit
my words will hurt you better go get first aid kit,little kid,i'll make you cry and scream
im scary like a fucking bad dream

this was an ok piece ur rhyme scheme was a lil off in spots has some emotion this is pritty good. but your probably not going to get many responces b/c u havent responded to others.