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Ape .vs. Remixed Illusion
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3-0 KO 4-1 TKO 5 wins No hate, crew or dr votes No feeding No recycling Due by tonite or early tommarow morning |
tonite, and i'm checkin in....
i'll lay my verse soon.... ................................ ........................... |
Checkin' In.
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Ape, wut kinda name is that? wut u an animal?
are u a canibal? is ur mind really that minimal? man u more likly to get date raped by a male ape! u wont escape tha grasp when he wants to mate! do u really think u can swing from my limbs? u can be like lil kim, and wing from my dick limbs! u can wrap them lips around my skin, then sit and spin! now dont be rehersing ur verse, cuz its gon be dirt... jus be a man and take tha pain to loosing this verse, get hurt... yo spit aint gon b understood, jus be heard as a slurrrr! |
Do I really need to waste a verse on this? Just makes me laugh.
Nigga, I can only drop 1 Line, and still make ya loss record Parallel/ No wonder ya wanted to battle me, Illusion always got a Double L/ Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah, Ape will put this nigga in a hurse/ That was my worst line ever, but it still was better than ya verse/ Visit my Bars, a Punch you couldnt even Afford/ How you gonna be Illusions when it looks like you could even See-Ya-Keyboard/ I'll make ya head spin, ya Illusions will be Seein' Doubles like Rum/ Now you can predict the Future, by just Lookin' At Ya Loss Column/ Battling You is like me Racing-A-Car without an exhaust or a Header/ Advice for you, PM and Admin. and ask him to make a Forum...Ways-To-Get-Better/ That pissed me off how I needed to waste a verse on you. Damn!!! |
Damn, I didnt even know. I had some streached lines and then some short lines. Woops. Ooh well, still tore him up. Uppin'.
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No Explanation Needed Really...Ape Killed Illusion...Way Better Punches, Wordplay, And Flow...Not Too Much Personals Though...
Illusion...You Gotta Elevate Alot... VOTE=APE Check Out My Battle And Drop Some Honest Votes... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6591#post946591 |
aiigh Ape you got my vote...
you str8 up killed him...just like planet x said.. there really isnt and explanation.. it would be just a wast of time.. you verse is the explanation.. PZ |
i'm gonna give ape this one by far he just had better punches an he handled it more like a veteran you had some alright wordplay though allusions plz hit this up it only needs one more vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91529 |
punches=ape
flow=ape structure=ape word play=ape personals=tie vote=APE ----------hit my battle up, kclipz vs handcuffs--------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
Ahha, people, please break down the verse line for line so we can see our improvments. Thanks.
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^^^Read!!! Ahha. Uppin'.
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Let me get all my Uppin's in.
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