Tragedy Struck
 

Song: Tragedy Struck

INTRO: I walked with you....

CHORUS:

Im not afraid to say that Gods got a plan for me [All I know (Ive signed with you)]
but its twisted and torn with the pain of tragedy [all ive seen (Ill die with you)]
and the loss of close ones makes it hurt much more [all I do (I've tried with you)]
Its sad to see you go I dont wanna let go [reflections of you (I've cried with you)]


VERSE 1: RehaB

The last thing on my mind was death on my way to church
but God had his hands at work a plan to help or a plan to hurt
I'm not sure but at that moment we were hit by a drunk driver
blindsided and realizing at that time I thought my brother was flying
when really it was me I was flung from the accidents debree
and I watched as the weight of the two cars crushed my family
and at fifteen years old I was suddenly catupolted into action
grabbin my dads arm and gaspin for breath away from the gases
but the seatbelt was fastened so I smashed in the glasses
and grabbed it to snap it but I could'nt keep up the traction
I slipped and fell saddened I could'nt rescue the passengers
and after minutes and drastic work I watched the gasses burn
I saw my dad he turned and mouthed the words that forever stayed
it was meant to be this way God has a plan for you just pray
and when that car came my way you know I prayed that fatal day
when my angel saved me from the embrace of heavens gates

CHORUS:

VERSE 2: Fonetic

10-26-02, thats when my wonderful life came crashing down
A smile that was once there switched into a frown
Remember that day like it was yesterday
Was outside in gym class laughin and began to play
Then I heard I was checkin out, thought to myself why now
Then silently to myself in my own tears I began to drown
Then it struck me like a 1,000lbs were dropped upon my mind
I knew my grandfather days of resting had ended this time
a man I so looked up and idolized
God took him away, but to a better place than this life
Suffered from cancer of the esophagus and spine
At his viewing I wished I could of just hit rewind
the tears swelled up and fell just as I saw the coffin
Later that night I got no sleep, stayed up tossin
Wishin that God was playing a trick on me and this was a dream
But then I saw the light and began to see

CHORUS:

VERSE 3: THe LAst PRophet

OUTRO:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95297
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94245
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=946402

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YO WUS^ REHAB, THIS WAS A GOOD PIECE FOR A BEGINER.
VOCAB COULD USE SOME ELEVATING BUT IT WAS OK, FLOW WAS GOOD, MULTIS WERE AIGHT, OVERALL A 6.5/10.

AND YA IM FROM PORT SAINT LUCIE, DO YOU LIVE IN OR AROUND THERE. PEACE

OH FORGOT TO SAY THAT I THUOGHT THE CONCEPT WAS REAL DEEP. THE CONCEPT WAS GOOD.

yeah ths concept was tight.......executed ok....but could have been better...quite limited vocab....but overall not bad....keep elevatin.....pZ

Tite shit for a beginner ....... good concept had multis and can elevate

7/10

lol im not a beginner but thanx any ways everyone...obviously this was a collab and the first verse was mine the second was not...

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pretty good... concept was ight kinda played
Flow was straight multis was tight

7.5/10