Dear Mama (Remix)
 

Repped:
The RehaB
MP~PHASIZ
WORD~PERFECT

same beat as Dear Mama' writtin by Pac...


Dear mama - dad was a bad man got locked up
got out still thuggin - got glocked up
the pain in your eyes i could feel it deep in my heart
never wanted to depart, but I had to dart
got deep in some serious-shit
caught up wit a thug, now im delerious-wit-it...
Im missin u more then you think
I know you shed tears when you blink
and it brings ya down, but listen ta me keep ya head up
never give up - it'll never end ~ less u stop fightin
now im out and our bond tighten'd..


Hook:
Mama what ever happens
we all got mishappens
you could neva disapoint me (never)
Happy you brought me into the world as your son...
(I love you)

Mama your appreciated*pause*
i know when i smoke you hate-it
its iriate, aint it?, so i quit.. cuz my love is stronger
Girls come friends come they go, your here longer....
Moved out - started hustlin
bustin me, cuz the things I do...
But mama I love you..
I pay your rent-and get you what u need
just keep runnin' neva stop...
cuz you the top of the tree top
Girls left me i looked twords my glock,
bout to pull the trigga, but my inna nigga
respect you so much i couldnt find it in me
but i was your offspring, and i couldnt pull it and bring you to your knees again...

Hook:
Mama what ever happens
we all got mishappens
you could neva disapoint me (never)
Happy you brought me into the world as your son...
(I love you)

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UPPIN THIS SHIT HOLLA

Nice, good flow, I can feel it. You shuld make the song on audio if you already haven't.

EDIT: noticed you were from chi-town also. where you stay at?

Im in humboldt park area, kedzie...
i was born burbank projects, moved to cabrni green at like 9
now im 19 and i lvie in humbolbt were u at

YO LoCo, wus^ nigga,this piece was deep, iwas really feelin it.
the vocab was good, multis were good, and the flow was perfect it neva went off track. i give a 8.5/10.
good shit my nigga PEACE.

not a bad piece, i suppose.......it should be much longer, and there was nothing at all to the hook.......i guess what matters is that it had a good message for your mother, no disrespect.......could have been more of an effort......o well.....

kinda simple it was iight
prolly not a good text piece
but it would be dope on audio
nice flow and a good message 4 ur mother
7/10

THIS IS A GREAT DROP IT PISSESS MEOFF ITS BEING SLEPT
ON

ty niggas for the reps... look for a collabo me n word and a few others doin
holla