Planet X VS _ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_
 

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Watch Planet Abuse This Kid, And Get Sent To The CPA...
Women Say He Dresses Nice...No Hes Just Gay...
Abuse Is From The Underworld...Well, X'll Send Him Back Home...
Ima Bust This Pussy...But By Guys, Abuse Is Used To Getting Boned...
Planet'll Murder The Flyweight...Abuse Only Gets Hard With Men...
His Text Is Worthless...I Could Spit Just As Bad...Let Me Post Your Battles Again...
We Could Never Match Punch For Punch...Planet's Above Abuse...
Abuse's Verse Stinks...His Script Is Garbage...I'll Take Out His Refuse...
X'll Is Known For Merks...Accept The Loss, Cause An Abuse Win Ain't Correct...
You're Barely Worthy Of Front Line...You Better Get With The Poetry Text...

here we go

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i'ma murder this kid, planet X aka 'burnt scripts'
beat him 'normal'ly like this for him, 'without'-verses
they call em herb of mouth, must be that hawiaan-punch
it makes him try his 'luck', but closest he's getting to 'signed's...rhyming on the 'back' of a 'bus'
he's nuthing but a crack whore slut, takes a 'nine to five' and that's in the 'gut'
betta stop acting up, or he'll be 'left' without 'eyeballs'
without a reason to 'live', ohh 'SNAP' did i break his ribs? here's some 'Midol'
this niggas a shy bitch, from the 'AIM' name i thought we was on some 'audio'-shit(aim name is audo summin)
then i heard one of his 'beats', and 'laughed'...cuz it was a fucking 'riot'
so 'repetitive' and wack, i didn't kno 'melody's' could be so bad
please though damn, 'Serenade' i could 'draw' a beat that's 'better made'...with no 'pad'



*refer to his profile ya'll see what i got at.

good battle
flow/tie
personals & punches/planet
wordplay/tie
opener/none
closer/none
vocab/tie
create/tie
overall/planet x
my vote/planet x
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Uppin...

Don't Sleep...

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Tha Breakdown.

Punches-X
Meta's-X
Personals-NA
Wordplay-Tie
Flow-Tie
Structure-X
Creativity-X
Multi's-X
Overall-X

Foreal X gets this...
The other guy's shit had no structure, didn't rhyme and was weak as hell......

X had good structure, floh, Punches......

Vote: X

For sure X took this. Better structure, metas, punches....he really ran the gammit on this one. I'll vote on this after i get 15 more posts which should be pretty soon.

Do a favor and vote on Meters vs. Unleashed Dragon and Meters vs. Rhymes

Vote-X

I mean no abuses was just wack... no rhymes flow no structure at all.. X takes all Catagories......................................

Vote X

vastly improved over the past months.....he merked this kid

personals- x
punches- x
flow- x
structure- very much x
pretty much everything else- x