slipt vs deser_eagle
 

rules

5 lines
no h/c/dr votes
3-0 win
5-0 tko
i'll drop first
check in then spit.
verse due 4.30 central time

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nigga, this is ya "first and last" battle. i'll have you "slipt" and "kicked off da site." this bitch prolly gon' "steal"
my verse and try to "flip-the-script"
dude prolly white, sayin "nigga" to try to be "hip." you like
an "obedient slave" you "whipped."

man, once the other guy spits back,,,,,,,,,,,i will vote on it..............but hit thsi shit up, man...............................http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95117

Ya soft like marshmallows fruity like gummies /
look at those lines is this Battlin for Dummies/

Not a racist comment just words my mouth shout /
take u out the picture wit some of my WHITE-OUT /

LET THE VOTIN START............................................. .................................................. ...............................................

heres your breakdown

Deser_Eagle
nigga, this is ya "first and last" battle. i'll have you "slipt" and "kicked off da site." this bitch prolly gon' "steal"
my verse and try to "flip-the-script"
^ No Flow nor Structure Weak Punches 5/10

dude prolly white, sayin "nigga" to try to be "hip." you like
an "obedient slave" you "whipped."
^ Funny, Enjoyed it .. alright vocab 7/10

Deser-75.00

Slipt

Ya soft like marshmallows fruity like gummies /
look at those lines is this Battlin for Dummies/
^ Horrible I mean 1/10 vocab and 1 alright punch.. had structure and flow though... 6/10

Not a racist comment just words my mouth shout /
take u out the picture wit some of my WHITE-OUT /
^ Worst Vocab.. captilizing the WHITE-OUT just makes it look worse.. 4/10

Slipt -45.00

Overall-Deser_Eagle

hmm well this was a really weak battle all around if you got a record of 5-5 you gotta come harder than that even if this is his first time.....spilt you should hit the whckness center and learn what kind of things people look for in battles....deser work on structure. vote deser

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slipt gets this vote....

opner:slipt
flow:slipt
structure:slipt
closer:slipt
punches:slipt
overall:slipt

yo slipt return the favour and vote for this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/for...hp?s=&forumid=6


also join my crew u can find it in my link

^^^dick ridden...but hey. its okay to be a gay...ain't that right? anyways, uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. ...............

opner: deser_eagle
I wasn’t feelin split’s whole dummy line thingy, I found it weak

Not a racist comment just words my mouth shout /
take u out the picture wit some of my WHITE-OUT /

Dat line by split says it all, wasn’t feelin his lines at all

Closer:

dude prolly white, sayin "nigga" to try to be "hip." you like
an "obedient slave" you "whipped."

Very nice closer

My vote- Deser_eagle

Check dese out for me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96491
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96505

Yo I aint got much2 say 4 this battle....
Id definitely say a draw..Cuz both verses were good and flowed..


My Vot3-Tie

o0 Yea And sum1 plz give an honest vote in one of the battles in my signiature
ThX A lOt!
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