visinE vs. Frito
 

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I'll roll ya whole verse up like a burito, then leave you Layed out like Frito
Ya drop was tight but like a speedo, lookin for d/r votes so i call you guido
Screamin' bleed ho!, real raw knock ya teeth down ya throat
Scheemi'n off greeed yo, rob all ya stock creepin round ya home
Ya punches is played out, as i'm dippin fists "in the club"
I puncture ya brain now, sub-mission hits wit my snub
Too far behind now it looks like you'll never catch up
Frito's still watchin 8 mile tryna battle witta clever set up
but ya decisions is no better than the garbage you spittin
watch me shittin on every letter you harvest from ya writtin

Im the enemy the enema fucked you with literally
Physically, Mentally you arent lyrically profound
Faggot you are, if Yoda were around

Ill put you in rewind, instead of fast forward,
pause....play...Be Kind, be afraid of my horror

Hello? Mr. Voorhies please....(Kill Kill Kill)....
Hey Jason, this guy thinks he's Superman, turns out hes just Christopher Reeve

So I send you with a Sayonara, Bon Voyage, see you later bye
Ill pass you the visine to help clear that tear from your eye

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aight this battle was weak and punchless but fuck it i already wasted 63 seconds reading it so i might as well vote

Flow- tha first kid-take that dumb ass white glow shit off so somebody can read ya name

punches-none

metaphors-none worth shit

structure-2nd kiddo

line that won the battle-that harvest line even though i doubt you intended for it to be a play on words

yea ok man^........................

uppin........................ for these 2
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peace

Vasaline wins this. Ahha. But really, he had nice punches and good metas throughout unlike Frito. Okay battle, need improvment.

Vote: Vasaline

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visine took this one, better style and work on punches, frito lackin the depth in his punches and ending, not bad either of u, holla

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