dw vs brutalizer
 

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u spit first

iight ill hit this shit up later....

but dw u neva checked into our battle in elevated....its all set up and i already checked in...just waitin for you

could you also hit up the too battles in my sig...thanks

ill be waitin for ya checkin...then i will start writin my verse

ight ill spit.......................________________
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mc bruta........................
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ll rearange ur face............
have u like michael jackson with your nose displaced.........
this guys so wack ill battle him with half the keyboard..........
battling me u get pumpled u should have declined bfore...........
u little uk bitch................
my rhymes are better and urs have a glitch...............

lol^^^thought u sed u ad experience!

take u out of the game..shame this bitch is about to feel pain...
yes i'll take the blame...take ur verse n burn fuck a frame...
holdin heat in hand like statue of liberty thats how it stands...
land ya 1st loss ere by popular demand...
BT shud be put in administration 4 sellin u broadband..
quik few lines 2 show u up...be-head u then hold it up...
try to win by wriitin shit verses then boldin~em~up...
atleast u showed up to be placed in ya coffin...
no spittin jus coughin...brutalizer dawg..u ain't nothin...//

opener:dw
closer:dw
punches:dw
structure:dw
wordplay:dw
overall:dw


aiiyo your name be my initials,

you owned this dude, what you doin brutilizer, goin after a cat wit just over 80 battles.


will one of you please hit up the second battle in my sig!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

opener:dw
closer:dw
punches:dw
structure:dw
wordplay:dw
overall:dw
pretty lopsided battle........................................keep elevatin brut....

2-0 uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!1

DW merk'd this guy...no need ta break it down, cause it's obvious tha' DW won...no beef...

Overall: DW

Yo, can ya hit this up? it's bein' slept on...thx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96438[url

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!1

This was a pretty sad mer --uh battle. DW made this fool look pretty bad. went over 6 lines, -n- it wasn't even needed.

Pretty decent lines, DW.

Brutalizer WAS Brutalized.
Br: read up, get some punches and metaphors. You've got a long way to go to improve ya verse. Had some good starts of snaps, just refine 'em and make 'em more interesting -n- creative, not so simplistic and easy to see.

Vote: DW (easily)

Here's the active links -return the poll wit an honest vote, cuz they're gettin SLEPPPPTTTT...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96175

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95464

^^^thanx uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

METAPHORES - dw
VOCABULARY - dw
PUNCHLINES - dw
STRUCTURE - dw
CREATIVITY - dw
PERSONALS - dw
OPENING - dw
CLOSING - dw
MULTIES - dw
FLOW - dw

OVERALL - dw

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