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pot1ent 12-02-03 07:28 AM

[Amusements.]
 
The machines stood brightly
But she didn't take it lightly
More than unlikely
She was going to feel severe pain
Thinking 'Can I perservere shame?'
Well. . Its going to be here today
Snears invade Me like the natzis
Maybe I should say 'I go to all the partys'
But then they'll probably say ' Your tarty'
Or 'As If We Care, eeww, Look at her hair
She showing it off.. like her chests proped'
But after my preparations were made
I just said 'Their speculations Are Gay'
She then made. . A Declaration To Stay
She wasn't going to walk away
Then as her first step was took
She took one look.. At them
& remembered their the dead ends
'Now this silly behavior will end dead'
Trends spread.. over her with beauty
The boys was like 'Hey cutey'
As she expected.. She's disrespected
So tryed to make the scene deflected
But everyone knew her name..
As the 'Newer Game'
& that made her two pennys wasted
But the truth was that.. Many faced it
The girls hate it, But the men chase it
This 'Newer Game' was never dated
It endeavoured hatrid
When she took these slots
But her 2 pennys.. wasn't worth alot

pot1ent 12-02-03 07:35 AM

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pot1ent 12-02-03 03:15 PM

up..

Dev 12-02-03 06:07 PM

nice flow going man........seemed to keep it on point....not a bad scheme...nice to se sumthin structured diff.....instead of the equal lined stuff,,even tought the way you set it,.....sounds like would go better with a beat.....pZ.....

pot1ent 12-03-03 10:48 AM

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