Phayme vs PlatinumMC216
 

PlatinumMC216

bitch i dont no if you a he or a she
you can have a dick and a pussy and still wont beat me
well i guess you new to this close your mouth for i put my dick on ya lips you dont wont this drama
man iam hotter than a workout suna
iam the chosen 1 like lebron james
this is not parkers brothers you need not play no games
you really can not want this action
you accepted this battle so iam right her laughing
go ahead in post you reply
if thats you on that pictrue then you a dime but i rate your lyrics a min5

Phayme

you have a gay identity, killin's how 2 comemerate fags'
only time you a 'global' is surrendin wit' 'cofederate flags'
what a drag, this was your worst yet, what a diss u hoe'
tried to 'kiss wit' victory' so MC is under a 'mistle-toe!'
in the bitch-slapped, callin out my name! testin' to beat!
I saw his verse once, an swore he's off sesame street
no, MC is not dope, lookin like sadam hussien
fuckin chop off the 'sheeps' head, an put it in Osama's cave
I've have longed await, to kill u, so noone will mourn ya
Phaymes aroun' the block, your workin off the corners
sucking off for quarters an payin ghostwriters to be on the net
this dog's been tooken-care off, cuz Phayme's a vet

done.

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Phaym you merked this kid....

flow P
Punches P
Personals P
Metas multies P
open close: p

you took it all catagories his flow was way off he needs to work on structure and vocab once he does he might be iight...my vote phaym

lol thnx. 1-0 me.

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well phayme gets this shit easy............you won in every catigory no need for me to break it down.............................................. .......

also check this battle...................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95869

phayme merked him...harder punches.....actually a real verse by someone will experience...flow was on, structure was on. sesame street line was pretty ill

other cat seems like it was his first battle.....just weak rhymes and all that.....nothin stood out, just barely even put the right words together to make a verse....elevate by practicing dawg.

my vote: phayme


can u hit this up homie???

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...28&pagenumber=2

I will.

uppin 3-0 me. .................................................. .................................................. ......................

Phayme took this easy, sesame street line merkes the otha dude.
Not much breakdown on this, it was too easy to decide.

Honest vote plz

i mean honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95656

Can' believe C rocka and Jego were banned.

ohwell....4-0 me................................................ .................................................. .....................

Aiight Breakdown!!

PLatinum:shyt wusnt good elevate a lil more,punch's werent hard,flow wus off a little soo jus work on ur stuff n try harder next battle!!

Punch's:3:10
Multi's:3/10
Meta's:4:10
Wordplay:5/10
Structure:3/10
Overall:18/50

Now......

Phayme:HOt shyt Flowed nice!!....Punch's were good!!

(I saw his verse once, an swore he's off sesame street)

^^^ nice Punch!!......dat finished him!!

Punch's:8/10
Multi's:6/10
Meta's:6/10
Wordplay:7/10
Structure:7/10
Overall:34/50

Vote:Phatme

Reason:His Punch were good,flow wus good basically a good verse!!......keep it up,nice battle!!

Phayme hands down. Sesame street merked him lmao. When i heard dat i was like "ohhhhh". Had to highlight the line.
Punchlines- Phayme
Entertainment- Phayme

Return the favour by placin a vote der. Thx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97040