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Born To Kill 12-02-03 11:47 AM

Born to Kill vs. Tökën (crew leaders going at it)
 
He dropped this callout...

Black Tie callin Murderouz Methods Out..

Die?

lol j/p

Accept?


So...

As co-leader or whatever I am...

I answer and throw down my shit.

Good luck answerin it.

Peace

Born To Kill 12-02-03 11:51 AM

Some shit ta remember...

1) He's in the crew Black Ties

2) They call themselves The Polished Assassins



Token ain't nothin, just a boy pushed over the edge...
So he polished up his image, by sprayin himself with Pledge.
I'm here ta help, remove the whackness from this assassin...
But it's hard, yo...I take it out, and he just puts it back in.
I can tell you been practicing, tryin ta elevate I guess...
It's clear you don't suck anymore, but you don't suck any less.
So take that Black Tie, and wrap it tight around ya neck...
Commit suicide for RB, and you may finally get respect.
Then we'd all be thankfull, that this turkey exists no more...
Since Christmas is gettin close, you'd be givin what we wished for.

Evil_SoLo 12-02-03 03:12 PM

...................OH DAMN....FOR real I give you lots of props for that drop B2k that was some shit......FOr real damn....will be back Later to vote on that....LOL
LaTeR

Token 12-04-03 10:01 AM

Hey, My net has been down because I moved but i'm at my dad's now so I will key up now...

Sorry for taking so long homie...

Token 12-04-03 10:48 AM

Born To Kill must be joking, this wack head's gone mental
Your wins are exactly like your life.. accidental
Your existance is limited to a certain amount of wackness
With lines that repel everything.. Even electro-magnets
Impossible to withstand me.. Like a legendary land tree
Your shit could leave kids sadder than Christmas without family
Don't be ashamed of your age, As long as you believe
Who knows, Maybe you'll score a wife and let go of RB
Look at it this way, If wackness was dope, you'd be weed
Your pre written shit is no match for me..
..Like an exotic car in the street
.. This was just like you.. Key'd

B.I.Detained 12-04-03 10:53 AM

lol..not a bad battle at all.but i seen better...
Breakdown-
Punches-Token
Flow-Both
Metas-Tie
Sustainment-Tie
Enjoyment-Token...last line was funny
Vocab-Both
Overall-Token..wudda liked to see more personal shit but it was still nice pz

THIS IS ONLY COMMENTED TILL I GET 100 POSTS BUT CAN BOTH YA'LL HIT UP MY BATTLE PLZ..MAD SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96337

Token 12-04-03 12:00 PM

Thank you...
Uppin 1...
Good Battle BTK...
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~Rythmic Hints~ 12-04-03 12:13 PM

damn btk man when i first read ur verse i aint think he could bust back but mad props to token that shit wuz hott az fuck.......and at the same time i have seen btk come better than that not to take anything from token u rep'd!!!!

vote= token


drop a honest vote......holla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94648

Born To Kill 12-04-03 12:36 PM

Good verse, Token...

48 hours after I dropped mine, but cool, cool...

Glad the battle's on.

Good luck with it.

Peace

Token 12-04-03 12:37 PM

Lol.. Word..
But I just wrote it this morning..
I don't do none of that pre written shit..

Uppin 2

poetictendenceez 12-04-03 12:38 PM

good battle you two...but honestly I would have to vote for Token.....punches edged this out...b2k you had nice punches too, but IMO Token's were harder...good wordplay from both....loved Token's finisher....clean...hit this up when you all get a minute...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96353

Chrit 12-04-03 12:46 PM

Vote- Born to Kill...

More consistent verse...

And so Token doesnt bitch I'll break the verse down real quick like

Token ain't nothin, just a boy pushed over the edge...
So he polished up his image, by sprayin himself with Pledge.
Decent worpdplay... average punch
I'm here ta help, remove the whackness from this assassin...
But it's hard, yo...I take it out, and he just puts it back in.
Average bar... second line was decent
I can tell you been practicing, tryin ta elevate I guess...
It's clear you don't suck anymore, but you don't suck any less.
I like this bar... second line was nice
So take that Black Tie, and wrap it tight around ya neck...
Commit suicide for RB, and you may finally get respect.
Slightly played... but first line was still decent
Then we'd all be thankfull, that this turkey exists no more...
Since Christmas is gettin close, you'd be givin what we wished for.
Original concepts here... average closer

Born To Kill must be joking, this wack head's gone mental
Your wins are exactly like your life.. accidental
Played ass second line... in fact I've used this line
Your existance is limited to a certain amount of wackness
With lines that repel everything.. Even electro-magnets
Meh... using the wackness concept two bars in a row is bad
Impossible to withstand me.. Like a legendary land tree
Your shit could leave kids sadder than Christmas without family
First line was filler... second was decent
Don't be ashamed of your age, As long as you believe
Who knows, Maybe you'll score a wife and let go of RB
Age punches are getting old with BTK... been done so many ways... most of them better than this one
Look at it this way, If wackness was dope, you'd be weed
Your pre written shit is no match for me..
..Like an exotic car in the street
.. This was just like you.. Key'd
last line was decent... set-up was extremely played

So...
BTK wins coming less played....
Not great verses but BTK edges it

Token 12-04-03 01:15 PM

^ How many times do I have to say stay the fuck away from my battles your idiotic faggot.

That would be a hate vote.

You said nothing good about my lines.

You said all good about all his lines.

Honest voter? I think not.

uppin 3...............

Chrit 12-04-03 01:23 PM

^^^

You are an idiot...
I'm taking an interest in BTK battles as he is getting close to my win total...
And if you look a pointed out your average and decent lines...
As I did his...

I took the time out of my day to breakdown the entire battle...
So fuck you and that honest voter shit...

Slipt 12-04-03 01:24 PM

"Token ain't nothin, just a boy pushed over the edge...
So he polished up his image, by sprayin himself with Pledge"



"Born To Kill must be joking, this wack head's gone mental
Your wins are exactly like your life.. accidental"

TWO GREAT OPENERS~TIE

FLOW-BOTH HAD GOOD FLOW~BUT~B2K HAD THE BETTER FLOW~

STRUCTURE~BOTH WERE GOOD~

PERSONALS~TOKEN~


"Your existance is limited to a certain amount of wackness
With lines that repel everything.. Even electro-magnets"

GOOD CREATIVITY~

FINISHER-TOKEN

VERY HARD TO JUDGE~BUT~

VOTE=TOKEN

PEEP THIS MAN AND RETURN THE FEEDBACK~
Your existance is limited to a certain amount of wackness
With lines that repel everything.. Even electro-magnets


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