Da structure
 

everyone always says sumtin bout my structure, i dont know if its me but am i doin sumtin wrong. or is it just da way yall battle around here?

sample:
destroyin~my~foes, breakin~ya~bones from head~to~toe, ya cant heat up a battle so u "spit~shit~cold"/

ima spik havin better "rhymes" then flip~mode, ill take every stolen word from ya mouth and leave ya wit a "stripped~throat"/

my montrous rhymes are scarin ya-have ya runnin~out~ya~house, when dis nigga says hes "a hard nigga" it just means dat watchin black ppl leaves him "Seriously~aroused", da truth is killa class couldnt spit hot shit if he had diareha comin~out~da~mouth!!/


yall tell me wats wrong wit dat?:banghead: :help:

structure is how your lines are done

this is how you do it when you rhyme and battle people and it is rearlly gay/

this is what it should look more like ya know?//

in other words ure lines are too long shorten them down and try to keep them all the same length

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ok, i guess i get it

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simple as that

youl find if you have abetter structure your flow improves aswell..cus youl match sylabls in lines

your structure is wack!
try to keep the number
of syllables even and
your bar lenghth also even
tha'll make it easier to read

^^^like this

Answered... CLOSED
-Axe