TAG v. Yaz
 

6-10 lines
Only members from D.O.I can vote
No feedin and all that
G'luck.
It is 4:25pm Central time. work til 1am and I will drop by 1:30am Central time. You can either drop now or lata.
G'luck

uppin fo Yaz to see this.............................................. .................................................. ..........................

sorry man but i kant do this rite now, shit juss fuked up bad roun here and i mite not be on fo a wile... sorry fo u goin through da touble and settin this up... nex time im on il hit u guys up

Whenever you can drop.............................................. .................................................. ...........

iight yo, this for the D.O.I position so ima keep it tight

yo ¢hek it

u waz "up and ¢ommin", den ya saw me and started runnin
deprived of a real name... u kouldn't "TAG" nothin
so let me flip ya name roun an let me pull it
iz headin yo way kuz... prepare to bite da bullet
i got diss, juss han me da banner, theirs no mistake
yo rappins juss like da guy in yo avatar, a fake
der no way u kould eva be the best
evan if every Em¢ee died and u the only one left
shit would be fuked up if u were to win this
dat would meen d.o.i's coppin and this whole thing waz fixed

if u guys need a explanation or nething juss pm me

and uppin fo TAG to see i finaly spit... sorry fo da deleay again

Why cant i vote? Not cool enuff or somethin. Hm....

Well honest vote needed... I'll return da favor another time.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94300

hey hey, finally dropped. Checkin it here I go
Keyin up this shit bout ta "puke" an "ill" flow

This kids tryin ta get into our crew, haha yeah right Yaz
Every punch I throw hits leave ya wit a eye blacker then Nas
You get struck by "whitelightning" While ya "Envying my Skills"
I'm in a "Higher Class" then you Yaz's rhymes are just fill(er)
You want in Definition of Illness? Here I'll give ya an incentive
If ya get in you can be my test dummy fo all my Murderouz Methodz
By writin your rhyme, you aint helpin ya cause Yaz
Cuz your flaws outperform the few skills that ya got

opening - tie...both weak
flow - tag
personals - yaz
creativity - tag
punches - both
metas - Tag (tag had like 1 meta and yaz didnt have any)
multis - none
closing - yaz

overall:

yaz = 2/8
Tag = 3/8
both = 3/8

my vote - tag

yaz....even if u lose this battle i think i still want ya in

tag got this one by far yaz almost had it though close battle we need to see some votes to close this battle out

in fact tag ill vot for this really soon im closing in so yeah ill vote cuz u took this away from him by far yeah thats it by far!

NM doi memebers eh nm sorry about that wasnt fully reading everything just the flows my bad yeah good flow though!

uppin fo D.O.I membas to see this and vote.............................................. .............................

well i would vote on this but i'm not in d.o.i. but if you could do me a favor and vote on this i'll vote on some other battles for you guys........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...46&pagenumber=2

well..Yaz u did ok.. but Tag really did put some work on ya.. hope u didnt thik you can get in that easy..but keep workin dawg.. you'll get it iventualy

punches-tag
personals-Yaz
meta's-tag
multies-none
flow--hmm i give it a tie
creativity-tag for using some mebers name to fit into his punch..that was nice

tag good job just what i expected from you..no easy win to get in the crew you want in your gonna have to do better than that yaz.. no hate.. im only helpin you out. also use more punches. wordplay and meta's dawg those are the main thing that win a battle.ohh and creativity..

good luck

pz