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B.I.Denied Vs TheProphet777
10 LINES MAX
NO FEEDING ETC 30 MIN SPIT LIMIT BLIND SPIT CHECK IN 1ST GOOD LUCK PZ ONLY EXPLAINED VOTES COUNT PZ |
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Yo check it...
its like this........ ' Yo look at me and look at the world man/ stick to your game plan and understand/ I dont got time to be wasting on this foo/ hes probably picking his rhymes from his buddies at school/ but i aint detroit and im not brooklyn/ Im the head of the men that have commited 9 sins/ Look man i dont care id rather see u be strained/ In fact you know what you should B.Detained/ 1 to the 3 to the 4 this guy has to say 10 or mo/ In fact this guy is the ugliist hoe ill ever know/ |
B Detained= His name
Numbers were based on my demo song 1234 but added a few touches to them Commited 9 sins was part of gods plan |
Keyed...check in also....
Here's the picture..I'm Framed N Admired..your Fake n Expired ....this chumps so decrepit he's already Fatigued n left Tired but I aint one to fuck w/ the Matrix..lmfao..or even the Prophet ...stop Dr'ing a fukin film..so grab ya pants and Hop off it.... to make Prophit..on RB battles you've gotta be able to Read... ..oh you cant Read my Mind!!...well I said no Herbs Please your like a Disease...your there...jus buggin n pissin peeps Off and the comparison is that I can spread you with a Cough..lol 8 lines done..i dont wanna waist more feeble thoughts on you.. so I'll Retire on this line...grab ya Pension book..its time to Renew |
nicely done lets get these honest votes in guys COEM COME COME!............................................. ..------------------------------------
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oh yea dawg..you can only upp the battle 5 times
jus dont want ya gettin dq'd pz...uppin____1st____ _________________________________________ |
Huh u can only battle 5 times eh gayness people take to long to vote i guess i should start posting on people then to lend a hand on others
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BI got this shit....................
........prophet barely dissed him....................... .............BI was rippin on tha matrix sig................ nice BI vote-BI hit this up with an honest vote.........thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96322 |
BI took this easily...
I'd break it down and all but I"m really just too lazy right now... Fuck it... you know who I am... And you should repsect my vote Vote- BI |
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VOCABULARY - B.I.Detained PUNCHLINES - B.I.Detained STRUCTURE - B.I.Detained CREATIVITY - B.I.Detained PERSONALS - B.I.Detained OPENING - B.I.Detained CLOSING - B.I.Detained MULTIES - ... FLOW - tie OVERALL – B.I.Detained |
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B.I Took This With Out Tryin......
No Exlpination Needed Really He Took This In EVERY Aspect.... Vote = B.I. Please Poll Vote This Shyt..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96270 |
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