Poetictendenceez vs Slipt
 

10-14 lines....drop in an hour....no feeding..no dick ryding...no hate votes...the usual rules....check in and drop

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Yea~

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one hundred eighty one posts, only three fucking wins
only way you managed that is one hundred sixty are "uppins"
birthday listed as not applicable, you're right your death day is what counts
go ahead and update your profile son, cause that day is now
props to you son, cause like other RB fags you don't take it in the ass
I bet you even got a girl, without spending a buck in cash
but hold up boy, seems that you just got a call
it was Dr. Phil askn for his blow up Oprah doll
ah, nigga take it, you're gettn lyrically murdered by this rhyme
you couldn't spice up your lyrics, even with a little time (thyme)
I was aiming for your eye but I "slipt" and split your lip
take that blood and go lube up your boyfriends dick

oh yeah....in his profile under "Birthday" it's set as N/A.....in his other battle he's upped significantly more than allowed....if u don't understand the other's you're dumb

//~Herbs drinkin-not-thinkin, he pop a cap, he got a brews
Headline of the News, "KID'S RHYMES MAKEs COMIC VIEWS"

//~Spit shit, to gimic, punching at wet bags, thinks hes ripping
legs folded, crushed at the ankles, now he's really cyrping

//~Im-scriptin, his-shit- pre-written, mis-fittin, niggaz appealin
shit-bitten, throw him in the fan, shit just hit the ceiling

//~A bucther, chop ya brain in half, to graph, truly a head spiltta
a two-time quitta, wipe ma ass wit his face, down the shitta

//~We anastedic, to ya thunder, cant feel ya, numb in a slumber
retarded herb, lines are like that movie dumb and dumber

//~Tendencies locked in ma spell for centuries, key swallowed
family to family, oprhans, his whole life he was borrowed

//~End with a toast, raise the steaks, or roast, poetic dorks
cuffs in copped, this man's popped like champane corks


Things To Know:

Pop A Cap on A Beer, Beer = brews (bruise)
Comic Views=Made Fun Of
Crypin=Crippled

nice battle

punches-slipt
personal-poet
metas-slipt
multies-poet
wordplay-slipt
structure-slipt
creativity-tie

overall-slip

damn this was hella close battle..props to both.. keep it up ya'll good verses by both but cant post a tie ..

can ya'll return the favor and peep my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96335

thank you

THANKS 1-0

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alright spit boi....although it was 15 minutes later...which should be DQ...but that's straight....uppin (1)

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slipt you forgot to poll on mine lol try to do that anyway i think this one was a good battle...
you both had tight lines
ah, nigga take it, you're gettn lyrically murdered by this rhyme
you couldn't spice up your lyrics, even with a little time (thyme)

We anastedic, to ya thunder, cant feel ya, numb in a slumber
retarded herb, lines are like that movie dumb and dumber

this was a close battle but i'll break it down like this..
opener-slipt
closer-both kinda weak i hate sexual shit.....so slipt got it
punches-tie
personals-poetic
flow-spilt
good battle from both hit me up anytime for any needs you might have

THANKS 2-0
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i gotta give this to poetic, honestly he had better punches and flow. It was more clean cut, slipt your ish was okay, i don't feel the structure that much but the disses were aight just gotta use more personals. vote is Poetic fav line good but the flow is forced. Peep my battle's yo thanks.

outtt

THATS WACK

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